10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2008 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
number one:
"you don't know me" is so kick-ass, that I'm glad it has its own challenge.
number two:
this story kicks ass even more than the song, so thank you (:
Author's Response: Well, that is lofty praise. Thank you very much.
Date: December 18, 2008 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful! Love the narrator's voice, here- it's really nice. The way you interweavet the lyrics works great. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the positive feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
10 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2008 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha love the end note. x) Short and sweet, I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
Date: December 17, 2008 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
When I saw the title of it, I was like "Oh the Ben Folds song!" I love that song so much, it is my most recent favorite song and everytime I listen to it, it reminds me of Pam/Roy, so I thought it was a funny coincidance! I liked it, very cool how you incorporated the lyrics with the changing thoughts in Pam's head. And...now I have to go listen to the song again.
Author's Response: Thanks. My hope was that it flowed.