10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 02:24 pm Title: Hiatus
This was just beautiful. I loved this paragraph about Roy -
"Roy hadn’t understood, but that was okay. She hadn’t really expected him to. He was a simple man who wanted simple things. He was happy with his job and he was satisfied with their relationship and he was content with his life. There wasn’t anything wrong with that."
9 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 10:06 am Title: Hiatus
This makes perfect sense.
"But if anyone were to understand why she had to do this on her own, Jim would. He would want this for her. She thinks he might even be proud." - so true.
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 09:07 am Title: Hiatus
This has a lovely style, and you do a credible job of giving reasons for Pam's actions post-wedding-cancellation that put her in a positive light. I suspect she's still acting out of fear, but I love this different spin on things. Great job!
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 10:13 pm Title: Hiatus
That was an interesting take on Pam's need for independence and to find herself.
Date: September 30, 2006 07:50 pm Title: Hiatus
That's deep and I like that she needs time to learn about herself so she can be a complete person on her own, not an appendage of anyone. It makes sense. Loved it! =-)