10 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2009 07:27 pm Title: I Can't Be Without You
OMG.
I love that song, it took me a while to realize its meaning ;]
this chapter rocked (:
10 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2009 03:54 pm Title: Never on the Face
So, so wonderful. Really. I have no words. lol
Date: February 17, 2009 10:24 am Title: I Can't Be Without You
sigh.
10 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2009 01:29 am Title: I Can't Be Without You
Heartbreakingly beautiful. :( I love how you captured the intimacy between them and how much Jim cares for her.
Date: February 11, 2009 05:33 pm Title: He Was Gone
wow...i don't really know what to say...i am shocked by it but the roy that is in this story would do that i think...hope for more soon!
Date: February 11, 2009 11:01 am Title: He Was Gone
Sorry I haven't reviewed lately. I'm still reading I swear :) I love it I think roy would really be that crazy.It seems to me that is is uncontrollable and in being so would be very likely to go off and shoot himself. ...I really want the next chapter...can you push the wedding date up or something ? (I'm just joking Congratulations!Hope you get everything straightened out)
Date: February 11, 2009 07:05 am Title: He Was Gone
That was not expected and alittle harsh for me. I'm more of a fluff girl. I will keep reading to see where this is going though.
Date: February 10, 2009 01:21 pm Title: He Was Gone
wow, that was pretty good.
really, roy would probably would do that it himself.
Date: February 07, 2009 04:10 pm Title: He Needed Her.
you are awesome.
such a cliffhanger xD
Date: February 07, 2009 08:43 am Title: He Needed Her.
That was a very good job of getting inside Jims head. I am now ready to see just what Roy wanted. Or am I?
10 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2009 09:17 pm Title: He Needed Her.
Ah, fail, I used a less than sign and it cut off my review. Must learn these things.
But what I basically said after that is that you did a very nice Jim, and that apparently Jim is to you what Pam is to me, writing wise; they just don't flow well. But yours turned out fabulously. It works.
10 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2009 09:15 pm Title: He Needed Her.
OMGG!!!!! I literally just watched that story for the five millionth time before reading this. It's beyond weird. I die inside every time
10 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2009 07:54 pm Title: He Needed Her.
more is coming soon I just need to finish it up then send it to my beta and one of my favorite Bostonians ;)
Great chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2009 08:45 pm Title: She was...
I really, really loved this. I loved the emotional descriptives and how we saw the changes Pam goes through during different times in her life. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: January 29, 2009 01:12 pm Title: She was...
yes, those pics of him are TO DIE FOR.
&& so is this story (:
Date: January 26, 2009 04:33 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
Oh my gosh...I would love the next chapter to be from jim's perspective...can't wait for an update
Date: January 26, 2009 04:17 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
waiting on an update.......hum hum hum
10 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2009 06:41 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
wow these last few chapters were superb!!
i can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2009 06:29 pm Title: It's Never Going To Change
i'm not sure which i enjoy more, the story itself, or the hilarious end notes.
hee hee.
Date: January 20, 2009 04:12 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
my god, would you go anywhere with a dude that just told you “But, I guess if they can’t actually FIND her, that’d be the best way to go…”?! I think I'd be on the phone with the police.
5 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2009 03:06 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
I like the story, but not a big fan of this last chapter sorry. It's just v.unrealistic in my opinion. Roy's hit Pam before now, so would Pam want to be with him again, and even more so would Jim even consider for one second letting Pam go anywhere with Roy? It's a very OOC Jim in my opinion.
Author's Response: Like before, I'm getting to that. In my mind, Pam wasn't leaving Jim to go "be with" Roy again, but would leave to try to talk him out of hurting Karen. She's somewhat scared of him because of what he's done to her before, but it wasn't like that all the time. Roy's so hot and cold that for all she knows, they could go sit in the parking lot and he could start crying and begging her forgiveness. The reason why Jim let her leave is coming up in the next chapter :)
Date: January 20, 2009 02:35 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
Hm. Would Jim EVER let Pam put herself in that situation? Couldn't a phone call warning Karen about what was happening eliminate the need for Pam to go with Roy?
Author's Response: I'm getting to that, lol... Just wait until the next chapter :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2009 01:29 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
ooh, suspense !
lol, liking this story so far;;
though I'm scarred for what's up with roy && pam...
it'll be okay, right? (:
Author's Response: I'm sure it'll be OK, Mixedbreedgirl :) No worries, just stick with me here!
Date: January 20, 2009 01:15 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
I have to be honest, you've made me nervous with this one. I don't know if I can handle Roy hurting Pam anymore. I'm anxious for more.
Author's Response: Aww sorry about making you anxious!! But it's coming soon, so be prepared :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2009 12:31 pm Title: She Needed To Do This
you took my idea and made it 5 times better.
love it.
damn.
loved it.
Author's Response: Aww I'm happy toy!! I hope I did it justice ;) Keep any ideas rollin!!