8 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2016 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Gorgeous. This came across so IC. I often wondered in season 3 why Pam didn't make some sort of physical gesture, even the slightest one. Especially so after Andy punched the wall, after they'd laughed together, and the two of them were standing next to each other in the conference room. She could have gently brushed his hand and played with his fingers, or *something* to let him know she wanted more from him.
This was just lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2009 03:04 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so amazing, how have I not read this before? :)
Date: January 24, 2009 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I always walk to work (helps that most days I work less than a mile away). Its been bitter cold out a few of these days, and my boss always is shocked that I walked there, even when its freezing cold, and I've got jackets and gloves and such on. I told her my car wouldn't even warm up by the time I drove there. Wasn't worth it.
I'm not a fan of cold at all.
"Because when Jim was in front of her desk with his tall body bent over it and his hands dangling in front of her, she liked it. "
I miss those moments.
"made her wonder why the guy was single."
I constantly wonder that. Actually, my thoughts are more like how can I have him for my own...
Oh, I love this. I can just see it, and its so realistic, gah, its beautiful!
Date: January 16, 2009 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was amazing. Honestly. Push is definitely the right word for what Pam needed in S2.
She let her hands fall to her side and stood naturally, her eyes on her empty hand for what seemed like hours. She had cried a little, but only because it felt kind of right and it was a strange feeling after ten years.
Absolutely perfect description of what I believe Pam would have felt after taking off the ring for the first time. Wow. I'm totally blown away by this one-shot!
10 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2009 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh. my. god.
that was wonderful.
I mean it, wow (:
10 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2009 10:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really, really great. I don't find myself reading too many stories from before they got together, but I'm glad I gave this one a chance. You captured Pam's feelings, her thoughts and her hesitation really accurately, I think- that really agonizing habit she had of being close to admitting something without actually saying it. Nice work!
Date: January 16, 2009 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1
A story so nice, I read it twice. This was absolutely beautiful, yanana. :)
Date: January 16, 2009 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, this is wonderful. You're captured the tension between them season 2 and ratcheted it up a notch.
I especially loved this line:
She was attached to Roy, she knew so much about him, and to think that maybe she didn't love him right now in front of the vending machine...
Good stuff.
10 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2009 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1
yanana, this was unbelievably good. I'm adding it to my favorites.
The fingers barely touched the wool of his coat, but not on purpose or anything. Such a great image.
Thoroughly enjoyed Pam's thought process as she analyzes her feelings, her life. She did flirt. It was the first time she had let herself think that, and even then she had kind of smiled at it like it was nothing. Her head knew her better than that.
This time, as she passed Jim, her fingers did what they always wanted to. In the space right above his collar on the back of his neck, she stroked the ends of his hair downward, until her fingers met skin. They dragged across skin and in the moment that Jim turned in quiet surprise, they skimmed his lips. That passage, and the interlude in the stairwell, were, in a word, electric.
Fine job. Keep it up!