Date: February 27, 2011 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've never read this before. I love when an older fic becomes a new-to-me! Great stuff!
Date: January 23, 2009 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nope. Not distracting. I'm excited about reading BIwHM again, and hope to see the film. Never thought about combining it with TO, and that just made me even more excited about rereading it!
8 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2009 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was awesome! I really enjoyed it and found it quite easy to read and understand what you were saying. You captured what happened in a lively and condensed (brief) version.
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2009 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooh, I like.
alotttttttt (:
Date: January 19, 2009 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice job, but Jim certainly doesn't come off as hudgely Hideous. *grin*
I especially loved the last line -
The someone else I’d become left her ...crying…in New York city …by a fountain…without a ride home so the ME I was could run to HER.
Date: January 18, 2009 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was good, I kind of wish you went a little more in depth, but what you have here is interesting. One note though by Scranton PN do you mean Scranton PA?