10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love how you kept it realistic (at least to me anyway, but I tend to be optomistic). Anyway, FANTASTIC job. Truly excellent.
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love how you kept it realistic (at least to me anyway, but I tend to be optomistic). Anyway, FANTASTIC job. Truly excellent.
Date: October 03, 2006 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
My apologies girl7, thought I already submitted a review. You have a couple going right now and my fic addled brain is starting to confuse show with fic with deleted scenes with speculation! Anyway, loved this as usual. Dancing is a good way to get them to stand close and then the touching can begin!
7 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw, what a lovely story. I just adore the sensitive, mature, advice-giving Michael (sometimes), and I love how they were both just so... amazed that it was finally happening for them. And of course everything post-their arrival at his place was wonderfully sweet and cute. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
What a wonderfully hot happy ending. I sure hope we get to see something similar in S3!! Sorry this story is over, really enjoyed it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww, thanks for the happy ending. And for including all the references to sexy-lanky-leaning Jim. And for finding a way to include the word squee.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
The sweetness continues.... loved this chapter. You have their voices and conversations down so well!
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Jim - Pam's finally trying to say how she feels and he thinks he is being rejected - again. Wonder what everyone at the reception thought of them slipping away? Lovely chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
You described the reception so vividly I felt like I was there. (And if I were there I would have been cutting in on Jim and Karen!) Great chapter - love Michael playing cupid.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Gotta love mature, insightful, persistent Michael. Only him and his single-mindedness could get through to Denial!Pam.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay, a new story from you! I'm enjoying the way the tables *appear* to have turned, at least from Pam's POV.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully angsty but yet hopeful chapter. How do you manage to keep writing such excellent stories! I just can't get enough! (TWSS!)
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sigh.
More please.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
This. Is. Awesome. I am so, so happy you finished this sotry and so quickly! My gosh. I am in awe. I am so looking forward to more stuff from you.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
GAH, I waited all day to finally read this last part! You nearly killed me during work today, here I was, trying to fill out forms, and I can barely write because I'm grinning so damn much... crazy, I tell you. This was a really sweet ending. Yea ... *squee*
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
So cute!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Date: October 02, 2006 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hee. Loving the story so far! ... Would you mind letting me know how you found out Jim's brother's name was Jonathon? I've read it in more than one story and now I'm curious. Thank you! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, I just made up a brother for Jim, named him Jonathan, and said he'd be (in my perfect world) played by Scott Foley. I had one person ask if they could "borrow" him for a fic, and I had absolutely no problem with that. Otherwise, it may just be a coincidence or something. It's all good! :o)
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Awww....thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Okay, so my friend just seriously shouted through my door, "Why are you squealing?!" I think that should let you know how happy this makes me. This whole thing was sweet and funny and hot and perfect. Ugh. I can't even express. The only thing bad about reading something that is so completely wonderful and that makes you so happy is the realization that next Thursday, Jim and Pam will be in the same position that we left off with.
Sigh. And now that I've been a buzzkill, I want to say again how amazing this is. Brilliant. I'll read this when I need cheering up.
Author's Response:
Yay! I made you squeal/squee!! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it so much - and yeah, I comfort myself about the current Jim/Pam angst by writing them as I'd love to see them.
Sigh. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was amazing! Hot, sweet, and a side of Jonathan. LOVED IT!
Author's Response: A side of Jonathan/S. Foley is always a pleasure to write, let me tell you. :o) Thanks for the review!
Date: October 02, 2006 11:58 am Title: Chapter 5
Such a great story. I hope something like this happens on the show.
You are the best updater ever.
Author's Response: Thank you so much - and me, too!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 11:47 am Title: Chapter 5
yay! you updated so quickly :) great ending...i simply cannot wait for this wedding
Author's Response: I know; me either! I fully don't expect this (though I would not complain if Jim did drag her down a hall and kiss the hell out of her), but oh, the thought of those two dancing....
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 09:38 am Title: Chapter 4
wow! i can't wait for the next chapter. great jam characterizations, and one of those bittersweet micheal moments = great story :) i need more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love it when they let us see Michael's sweet side!
8 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 08:48 am Title: Chapter 3
Ah, Jim's angst on the dance floor is great. Yay for confessions and kissing in the hall :)
Author's Response: Yay for kissing in the hall indeed! I'd love to see a moment like that on the show (but I suspect we probably never will....sigh.).
8 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 08:27 am Title: Chapter 2
I love the moment when Pam turns the corner. And I love Michael here - awesome ;)
Author's Response: I love sweet, compassionate, grown up Michael....because I love Steve Carell. :o) Thanks for the review!