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Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 05:18 pm Title: Creed

When I read the Phyllis chapter (which was great, BTW), I wondered how you would tackle love advice from Creed.  Well, this was brilliant!  Great Creed characterization!  The "Creed creed" made me laugh out loud!  I   can't wait to see what advice the other characters will give.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! The Phyllis chapter was a bit angsty so I wanted to follow it with something a little out there and voila - there was Creed!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 04:57 pm Title: Creed

So funny!  Oh, you got Creed down very well.  Great chapter:)

Author's Response: Thanks bitterpill!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 09:05 am Title: Creed

Gotta love Creed.

Author's Response: Yes you do! Seems like a lot of people have...

Reviewer: Kath Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 08:17 am Title: Creed

All those website and she couldn't even stop by GiveMeMyRemote.com?  Ugh!  Ha ha ha ha.  Another great chapter!

Author's Response: OH MY GOD!!! I'm so sorry Kath. I don't really use My Space anyway so I'll replace it! And thanks for your praise despite my horrendous lapse in judgment!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 07:27 am Title: Creed

What a joy this was! Totally tickled me. The Creed creed, a horse with no name, shaolin monks, calling Pam Missy - all perfect. Since TC, I've thought Michael is being set up to someday be instrumental in bringing J&P together, but after reading this, I'm thinking how cool would it be if Creed unwittingly played a role. Too funny.

Author's Response: Thanks Colette! At this point, I don't really care who brings them together just so long as it gets done. I imagine Creed is a man of great experience and wisdom but only recalls a small portion of it!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 07:22 am Title: Creed

Nice! Good Creed voice. "A horse with no name" - awesome :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! But I wonder how many of the young folk will get that reference?!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 07:17 am Title: Phyllis

Eeeee! I love Phyllis. It makes me a little sad that she never actually says she loves Bob. But you have her voice down perfectly - looking forward to clicking "Next"!

Author's Response: I love her too and I didn't mean to not have her say she loves Bob! Perhaps I'll go back and edit. But in the end it's really all about manipulating Pam back with Jim!

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 07:02 am Title: Creed

Ah, Creed.  Weird extraordinare.  I like this series so far - what a great idea.  And of course, Creed pilfering people's food.  Nice.  

 



Author's Response: Thanks GreenFish! I figured I could indulge myself without having to worry too much about what happens in upcoming episodes. And I know Creed stealing things has been done, but it just never gets old to me!

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 06:51 am Title: Creed

gah, i love creed! this story is great, i love both chapters so far :)

Author's Response: Thanks janelle! Creed does rock!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2006 06:46 am Title: Creed

Creed is the best.  He's a bit like the Delphi Oracle, if the Delphi Oracle had consumed extravagant amounts of marijuana.  :-)

I am looking forward to Stanley's advice. ;-) 



Author's Response: Hee! The Delphi Oracle! That's an apt comparison. Creed probably has the answers to all the questions in the universe but they're trapped in his substance-addled brain!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 04:53 pm Title: Phyllis

I *love* Phyllis...so wise when it comes to Pam and Jim...at least in fanfiction! Could you please, please, please do a chapter for Dwight? Something along the lines of his "taming a wild animal" speech would be awesome.

Author's Response: Oh, there will be a chapter for Dwight and your suggestion has been duly noted! ;)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 12:03 pm Title: Phyllis

Oh my god, this was awesome!  Is there any way you can make this happen on the show?  Please????

Author's Response: Thanks girl7! I'm using all my powers of mental persuasion to try to influence the writers from thousands of miles away... If it doesn't work, I'll just create my own alternate universe like you do!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 11:03 am Title: Phyllis

Nicely done!

Author's Response: Thanks nqllisi!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 09:08 am Title: Phyllis

Very cute and I love understanding Phyllis.

Author's Response:

Phyllis definitely knows what to say to Pam. And she loves girl talk!

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 08:48 am Title: Phyllis

woooo phillis! she is amazing, and i can't wait for her to say something like this to pam.  (michael is the other character i could see doing it, in one of his moments of clarity) wonderful characterizations, i cried a little when phillis lost her "jim" :)

Author's Response: Yep, Michael is definitely going to get himself involved and take all the credit if they get together! Poor Phyllis, but Bob will take good care of her.

Reviewer: twentythree Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 08:08 am Title: Phyllis

Oh, man. That just totally killed me. You got the chracters perfectly, I thought. Awesome story.

Author's Response: Thanks! Enjoy this one because Dwight's advice won't be nearly as sweet and helpful!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 07:58 am Title: Phyllis

So sweet!!!  Phyllis is so great:)  I could totally see her being a big JAM shipper!!  Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Phyllis rocks. And her wedding makes her the obvious choice to talk to Pam and set her straight.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 07:36 am Title: Phyllis

Gotta love that Phyllis. I could hear both their voices and it seems realistic that Pam might actually hear what she says... 'great love of her life' - yes. Now if only the 'official' (TV) Pam would get clued in like this.



Author's Response:

Yes, if only Pam would get clued in! This is why I'm manipulating the universe and making her office-mates tell her their stories. I'm hoping one of these will become reality soon...

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 07:17 am Title: Phyllis

I love Phyllis.  When she says, "And Pam, the way he used to look at you? God, most women would give anything to have a man look at them like that", that just felt so real.  Good job! :)

Author's Response: I love Phyllis too - that's why she gets to go first! Also, she seems like she has some secret lost love in her past. Thanks ;)

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