Date: March 08, 2009 04:18 pm Title: Time
Hot stuff. I don't know why but Jim's text "I like you," just made me smile so much, it was very Jim.
I also loved how you always had Jim help Pam feel more secure in herself, it just worked beautifully :)
Date: March 08, 2009 03:42 pm Title: Look
WOWOWOWOW. I have no words. That was adorable, hot, smart, funny, sexy, real...perfect! I loved, also, how you wrote Pam's insecurities - and how Jim made them disappear every time. Awesome!
Date: March 08, 2009 02:41 pm Title: Look
I have no words. You broke my brain. I'm going to go reread that so I can give some actual feedback now lol.
Date: March 03, 2009 03:52 pm Title: Date
i don't hate you at all. in fact i almost always love it when they don't immediately have sex. it just seems more realistic to me. :) anyways, i've been enjoying this story a lot and thought i'd comment to assure you that you're doing a great job. it has an awesome pace. also, you can't have two firsts at one time, right? hehe
Date: March 03, 2009 01:13 pm Title: Date
I don't hate you, I like you (:
yay for future smuttttttttttttttttt.
9 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 10:12 pm Title: Date
Whoaaaa :D that was hotter than if they'd actually gone all the way. Good suspense! The wait will be worth it, I'm sure (or at least I keep telling myself). But I really feel like it's JIM and PAM, very in character.
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 08:05 pm Title: Look
--sigh--
I'm in love.
Date: March 02, 2009 08:02 pm Title: Date
"I wouldn't have a problem if you tried, though. Just so you know." He leaned down to kiss the crown of her head, and she pressed into him further. She could feel herself going back to sleep, so she kissed him lightly, right over his heart, then whispered:
"I'm glad you came back."
His arms tightened around her and she felt his lips on her hair again.
"Me, too."
I just pictured that in my head, and it was awesome.
This was fantastic. Pam's tripping over the mat, how Jim tasted/ smelled, the way he looked drinking a glass of wine... All glorious. And I'm praying to God that the next Chapter has some smutty mcsmut smut lol...
Date: March 02, 2009 07:34 pm Title: Date
i was just about to get off of my computer, but i saw that you updated so i read it, and i'm glad i did. I love this story i'm absolutly obsessed with it. You describe jim and pam's feeling's toward one another so well. Can't wait until the next update :)
Date: March 02, 2009 07:26 pm Title: Date
aw that was SO cute, I hope you have lots planned for this =) There are LOTS of firsts =)
Can't wait for the next update hehe.
Date: March 02, 2009 07:03 pm Title: Date
I love first date stories and this one did not disappoint! Awesome job!
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 06:55 pm Title: Date
so them.
everything i dreamed it was and more.
:)
Date: February 27, 2009 06:17 pm Title: Catharsis
Now we're getting to the super duper stuff. Loved it as usual.
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2009 02:34 pm Title: Catharsis
happy. :)
Date: February 27, 2009 01:14 pm Title: Catharsis
oh oh oh.
your descriptions are always so lovely (:
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2009 07:51 pm Title: Catharsis
I loved it so much! This brought back that feeling I got when I first watched those episodes -- happy sigh--
Date: February 26, 2009 03:15 am Title: Reunion
Awww, sad! Oh the season 3 angst. I'm loving the fast updates though. Can't wait until the happy firsts begin!
Date: February 25, 2009 01:25 pm Title: Reunion
oh, angst.
but we all now how it ends (:
Date: February 24, 2009 06:38 pm Title: Phone Call
GORGEOUS, poor Pam, she almost got to the good stuff with Jim before she "woke up" from her dream lol.
But seriously, amazing. Keep it up:)
Date: February 24, 2009 01:09 pm Title: Phone Call
I HATE YOU!!!
THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY CRUEL.
i seriously considered throwing something.
i should have seen it coming.
(for real, though, that was chilling, and...flawless. can you say cliff hanger?? i'm loving this, as much as it tortures my soul.)
Date: February 24, 2009 12:55 pm Title: Phone Call
guhhhhh, your fantasy sequences get me everytime (:
Date: February 24, 2009 06:38 am Title: Phone Call
I think this was actually updated while I was reading it. I swear there were only 5 chapters when I was halfway through. Awesome! Anyway, I'm loving this story, and anxiously await your updates. I can't wait until we get some real Jam moments, rather than dream/fantasy sequences! But I'll be patient :D
Date: February 23, 2009 06:52 pm Title: Look
Loving this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 23, 2009 06:47 pm Title: Confession
i love this! more, more!!
Date: February 23, 2009 12:49 pm Title: Confession
oh, this was lovely.
you have such a way with words (: