10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1
OH, WOW. This was so sweet. And sad. And beautiful. I really enjoyed it:)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm really happy you liked it :)
8 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Love both POVs. Good job here!
Author's Response: Thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved how you wrote the first-person naratives here. Jim's especially was spot-on.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! And that the first person worked for you because I am such a sucker for a first person narrative.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really, really lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
so sad that they both want it but don''t go for it.
Author's Response:
Right? It's one of the things that I love about J/P. It's angsty but it's never so angsty that I want to throw myself off a bridge.
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. To get both of their voices so right in first-person narrative is really amazing. I loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)