1 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2021 11:31 am Title: Jim
Now that postings have finally slowed a bit I’m having a chance to get to stories that have been collecting dust on my bookshelf. The wedding always broke my heart just a little bit (who am I kidding a lot) and you captured what Jim would have been going through- and did it in the 2nd person narrative which is not easy to do - so good job on that. Glad I finally got around to this one. (While waiting on MIS...ahem). Looking forward to Pam’s side.
1 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2018 11:39 pm Title: Pam
I know it's probably way too late for you to continue this, but you did ask in the note...so yes, please do, it's great.
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2009 10:09 pm Title: Pam
After having talked about this one I went to read it again and I realized I hadn't left a review and I thought I had. I really like these, and I would love to see what you could do for Karen's POV and Roy's too, I think they would all be interesting perspectives of the exact same event. Granted, theirs may be a lot less intense, but you know, it would fit well with these two. Of course, you have to finish Firsts and Soc 101 first :):):)
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2009 05:09 pm Title: Pam
Again, perfect. I'm sad I never read this before :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2009 05:08 pm Title: Jim
I can't believe I never read this before, this was amazing. I loved reading Jim's pov from Phyllis's wedding, again you nailed his thoughts perfectly!
10 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2009 05:30 pm Title: Jim
this was...heartwrenching. and really, really well written.
Date: February 24, 2009 03:35 pm Title: Pam
The juxtaposition of this:
She's singing about how every little thing she does is magic, and you're willing to bet that every thing she does just turns Jim on.
and
Karen has run up to the stage and is singing another wildly appropriate song, one about how every little thing Pam does is magic and how you know your love for her will go on.
is awesome. Really. I love how this is written. You captured what I *pray* they were both definitely thinking at that very moment. I loved it :) Kudos!
Date: February 20, 2009 06:58 pm Title: Pam
cute cute.
I still don't like roy, but I'm better than I used to be about him (:
8 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2009 03:29 pm Title: Jim
Hello! (knocks on computer monitor) I'm out here reading and enjoying your work - and I agree that you should continue on with Pam and Karen's POV, too.
I loved this look at what Jim was thinking and feeling, especially:
"The worst part of it was that she knows. At least, you hope she does. You think she does. You'd be devastated if she didn't." and
"Karen has run up to the stage and is singing another wildly appropriate song, one about how every little thing Pam does is magic and how you know your love for her will go on."
Great job!
Date: February 15, 2009 09:28 pm Title: Jim
wow, I liked this.
&& usually I don't read first person POVs (:
10 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2009 05:57 pm Title: Jim
Everytime I hear that song, I think of Jim in Season 3. Great story!