Date: September 23, 2009 12:56 pm Title: Love Today
Okay, this story gets better and better. Karen is the new reporter, the possible museum closing as a juxtaposition to the branches of Dunder Mifflin closing... and Kelly and Ryan and Jim... the Jim angst at the beginning was fantastic. Your idea gets more and more creative as we move through. As always, awesome work.
Date: September 23, 2009 12:47 pm Title: I Try
I loved the inclusion of the bird funeral, even though Toby wasn't there. Haha. I also loved the Pam introspection in this chapter, and the way you gave us a little bit of the previous day in her thoughts. I'm really looking forward to seeing what was up with Jim and the article... interesting twist. Great work!
Date: September 23, 2009 12:39 pm Title: Only You
Fantastic first kiss. That was probably one of my favorite 'first kiss' scenes ever. Great job with that. I also loved Jim's introspection at the end. This has to be my favorite chapter yet. Great job, as usual.
Date: September 23, 2009 12:30 pm Title: Hangbags and Gladrags
I loved this chapter. Jim and Captain Jack and Pam... and all of it was just hilarious. I like that you included Stacy and Abby in this, that was funny too. And Phyllis! Haha. Great work!
Date: September 21, 2009 04:16 pm Title: Green Onions
I like that as this story progresses, I'm loving your references to the show more and more. It's great that you worked so hard to include those. Awesome job. I liked the tense moments between Jim and Pam here. Looking forward to more...
Date: September 21, 2009 04:00 pm Title: Kiss the Girl
I love the end of this chapter. I also love that you included Carol and the basket instead of the teapot. I think it's really cool how you're going about this. Great job!
Date: September 21, 2009 03:49 pm Title: Bang the Drum All Day
Oh man, this just gets better and better. Phyllis, Oscar, Angela! Angela was my favorite in this chapter. I could hear her saying the lines when she was telling Pam to get away from the figurines. Priceless. I loved Jim and Pam in this. Still loving it, looking forward to the next part.
Date: September 21, 2009 01:15 pm Title: She's So Lovely
I loved this chapter! Stanley's pretzel thing was hilarious. I could hear him saying all of this to Jim. And I loved Kelly and Ryan there, too. I like that Jim's already smitten, but he's taking things slow. And Pam? It's cute to see how she's getting back into the game. Loved the show references in here, again. Great job.
Date: September 21, 2009 01:07 pm Title: Goodbye Stranger
I liked Pam's subtle gestures here to show that she's interested in Jim. I loved the way you compared her feelings for Roy at the time to her feelings for Jim. I think the inclusion of that was awesome. Also, I loved that Katy was included in this chapter. I'm really liking your take on this and I'm looking forward to hearing some of the things Jim has to say!
Date: September 21, 2009 12:58 pm Title: The Pirates Who Don't Do Anything
I love how you've incorporated Dwight into this story. This is hilarious, refreshing, and unlike any story I've read so far. I also liked the continuing bits and pieces of a backstory we're getting about Pam and Roy. Loved the references to the show built in here too. The way you write Jim and Pam together is always hilarious, and this is no exception. Great work!
Date: September 21, 2009 12:48 pm Title: An Old Fashioned Love Song
I liked the first part of this a lot. It was cute seeing their first meeting. I loved that you included the little details from the show into this, as well. And you did a great job at giving us a backstory. Especially with Pam and Roy, and the other nutjobs that work in Scranton too! Loved it, looking forward to reading the next part.
Date: September 12, 2009 07:04 pm Title: That One Night
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10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2009 12:34 pm Title: That One Night
This was AMAZING. I can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to date #2 :) Michael amd Jan just killed me, and then Dwight, Angela and Andy and the whole duel - oh pure gold my friend, pure gold :)
Author's Response: I love your enthusiasm, Sally! It's very encouraging. Yeah, I knew I wasn't going to get the Dwangela love triangle in anywhere else, so everything was kinda pushed into that little scene, but it was a lot of fun write. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks so much for taking the time to review, means a lot! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2009 12:04 pm Title: Big Blue Sea
I loved how you brought Dwight and his Second Life in to this, and Jan inviting herself and Michael along for Jim and Pam's first date... priceless!!!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! :) I'll admit, this was kinda a tricky chapter to figure out what to do with. Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2009 07:08 pm Title: That One Night
wow. that was really good, michael and jan, how stupid! anyway, great chapter, and i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah, Michael and Jan are quite the pair huh? Thanks for reading/reviewing, I really appreciate it! :)
Date: September 10, 2009 06:52 pm Title: Big Blue Sea
whew. this is interesting. and what a great week for me by the way, this is just about the fifth story that's been forgotten and then reincarnated this week. so exciting.
anyway, great chapter, and i'll read the next one as well.
Author's Response: Hey there, glad you enjoyed the chapter! Believe, this story has most definitely not been forgotten, I just had to put it on the back burner for awhile. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: September 10, 2009 10:36 am Title: That One Night
Look at you with another speedy update, Pam! Holy cow--you weren't kidding about the worst first date. Complete with flames! Thoroughly looking forward to the second date :)
Author's Response: Hey, Nan, yeah, this chapter just came easily so I was able to get it out quickly. I think the second date will go much better than the first. :) Thanks so much for reading/reviewing, it means a lot!
Date: September 07, 2009 06:00 pm Title: Big Blue Sea
So glad to have an update to this, Pam! You have me so nervous with Jim and Pam and their jobs. I hope these two can just enjoy their date. I know--too easy, right? ; )
Author's Response: Hey, Nan! Always lovely hearing from you. :) Well, I'm not going to lie, I don't think they'll enjoy their date. But...I do think they'll enjoy what happens after. (hehehe) Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review, I do appreciate it very much! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2009 03:37 pm Title: Big Blue Sea
I really like how you've had Jim been made accountable for his slacking off at work. Great chapter, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review, Noodles. I really appreciate it! :) Ah, yeah I was afraid how this chapter might go over since Jim gets beat up so much in it. But I'm big on trying to make it somewhat realistic and Jim's slacking off would catch up to him eventually, plus it was an arc on the show. It's gonna get a little worse for a while, but of course, there's always a happy ending. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2009 11:32 am Title: Spinnin' and Reelin'
It's so refreshing to see Jim mark his territory with the purpose of shoving his good fortune in another man's face. We haven't gotten to see that side of Jim on the show but it's a perfectly normal human trait and so I was very happy with the way this chapter ended. I'm looking forward to where this is going with Jim's job, which seems to be in peril, as well as Pam's job status with the museum's shaky financial situation.
Author's Response: Hey Goodtime Fella, thanks so much for the review. :) You're right, Jim really hasn't done anything like that on the show but I agree, it is a natural thing for any human, no matter how committed a relationship you're in. Plus, Ryan deserved that. Plus, I thought it was darned romantic. Yes, both of their jobs are going to hit some rough patches, Jim's especially next chapter. Thanks for reading! :)
Date: July 20, 2009 09:06 am Title: Spinnin' and Reelin'
I'm loving this story. I just like how you can awesomely incorporate all these minute details into the story. The line
"You guys get together. Jan and I are back together. And they’re serving free ice cream today…” I thought it was great call back! Update soon?
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Dedeen. I'm glad you like the little details I throw in there. That's part of the fun writing this. Real life has been rather busy, hence the space between updates, but I'm still working on the story.
Date: July 20, 2009 07:56 am Title: Spinnin' and Reelin'
::jumps for joy:: Squeeee! So happy they're together :)
Author's Response: Oh my, made Nan squee. :) Glad you're liking it. Thanks for the review!
Date: July 19, 2009 04:48 pm Title: Spinnin' and Reelin'
Yay! Italian food reference! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, just had to get that in there. (TWSS?) Thanks for the review! :)
Date: July 19, 2009 04:09 pm Title: Spinnin' and Reelin'
YYEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! Excellent chapter. The end. hehe!
Author's Response: Ah, sorry, no where near the end. :) Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2009 03:55 pm Title: I Want To Hold Your Hand
ahhhhhhhhh. that's good stuff. like caffeine in a way. makes me laugh and i'm more awake! (sorry, i'm sick right now, and i needed entertainment!) great job!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading/reviewing! :) Hope you feel better.