10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 10:46 am Title: Chapter 5
“Fact. You talk too much.”
BWAH! That was adorable!
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks Jonah5!
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 10:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Sneaking away from my work to say "Awesome job", again! The image of Jim pering through the blinds is LOL funny. Hee. And cookies!!! Good for Dwight :) And good for our young lovebirds. Yay ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Shan! Glad I could break up your work day. I just thought that image was too cute to pass up. And though the cookies reference brings squickish things to mind (HA!) - they do say there is someone for everyone! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 10:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Aw. I love marital bliss Jam!
Author's Response: Oh proposals. ME TOO.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 09:53 am Title: Chapter 5
I love this story. I am happy Kurt and Janie are not letting their parents get in the way, especially since they are not doing anything wrong or bad.
Author's Response: Thanks Gen! Kurt and Janie are MUCH smarter than their collective parents. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 09:40 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm going to be sad when this story ends! You're great at writing dialogue that rings true to the characters, and the way you handled the idea turned out wonderfully! Loving it.
Author's Response: Aw thanks GreenEyes. I'm going to be sad too. I had a ball writing Schrute Jr and the Halpertette. :) Thanks so much!
9 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
!!!!!
This made me laugh... hard. (Oh, Angela. :D) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Em - I'm glad to hear it.
Soon!
9 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 11:48 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh no! Bad Angela! Kurt and Janie are so cute. I really hope they outsmart her.
Author's Response:
They are cute aren't they?
We shall see if they outwit Angela....
8 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 07:15 am Title: Chapter 4
"Yeah – well. You're beautiful."
Spoken like a true son of Dwight :)
Author's Response: Those Schrute boys. They have such a way with the ladies. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 06:43 am Title: Chapter 4
Liked the Romeo & Juliet reference and the idea of Angela keeping Dwight in line by withholding her 'charms.' Too funny. Also, don't know if you intended it, but when they snuck out of the lame dance to be alone, I couldn't help thinking of the Booze Cruise scene...only this time it ends in an actual kiss, instead of a 27 second imagined one. Awww.
Author's Response:
I might be projecting my love of all things Jim and Pam when I write Janie and Kurt.
It's possible. ;) Thanks Colette!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 06:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh. My. Gosh. THAT WAS HILARIOUS. I'm sitting in a library reading it, and I still can't manage to stifle my laughter. I have you to thank for the angry glares. Anyway, brilliant chapter. Keep going!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry for the glares...not sorry I made you laugh as it was my intention. :) Glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 06:04 am Title: Chapter 4
oh no don't go Schrutes. they will spoil everything
Author's Response: Maybe....maybe not. ;)
9 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2006 03:32 am Title: Chapter 4
Janie and Kurt are freakin' adorable. They're the preternaturally confident versions of Jim and Pam, somehow- and all four of their parents are hilariously, wonderfully themselves. I can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
I had to make Kurt and Janie the rational ones - because their parents are crazy enough.
More soon!
10 [Report This]Date: October 10, 2006 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love it, again, some more! Angela and Dwight married is so perfectly awful, and Kurt and Janie are so cute, and Jim and Pam are just sweet, even when they're yelling at each other.
Author's Response:
Hee! I'm finding Angela is the easiest to write - and I LOVE how angry she makes Pam. I'm loving how both Dwight and Jim are like the voice of reason.
Not much more left. I'm so glad you're liking it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
This chapter involving Dwight was great! It's just so... Dwight. The Empire, rebel forces ... fantastic! I also liked the fact that you referenced the TV show here, it's funny, but sometimes I think we forget that their parents would be forever engrained as a part of TV history, not just ex-coworkers. That kind of put an interesting picture in my mind -- that their kids know a lot more about their parents history than most kids do.
Which makes the Halpert-Shrute pairing all the more insidious. I love it!
Author's Response:
Don't you mean insinious??? LOL!
Dwight used Star Wars references because he was a Sith Lord on Halloween and I've at least seen those movies. I know next to nothing about Lord of the Rings. :)
I thought it was important to keep things tied to the show in some way. Writing nearly twenty years in the future is really tough and I do believe that they both know waaay too much about their parents. I mean Kurt must cringe at the "cookie" references!!!
Glad to know you think it works!
Date: October 07, 2006 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
This continues to be amazing. I guess I'm now a Jurt shipper? Kanie? Kurnie?
Author's Response:
Hmmm. How about Schralpert?????
Glad you're still with me. :)
8 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 09:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Hee! Kurt is so clever - and Dwight is still so Dwight! And the rest of the chapter leading up the that last amusing scene was pretty adorable, too.
Author's Response: Hee back Semby! Dwight will never change. I'm glad you liked it.
8 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
That sounds like something my dad would say - when he's - you know - making fun of your dad.
Nice!
And, oh, Dwight, it isn't all about you! Nice Dwight voice - "we need to approach this strategically." Hee :)
Author's Response:
Hee! You know after I started this I really thought I'd hate it. It's so hard to imagine their offspring in any realistic way. I decided that they'd both think their respective parents were a bit bonkers and bond over it. :)
Thanks Shan!
Date: October 06, 2006 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
XOXOXO - here's a tip: go to pampong.com, season 3...they have the entire episode up (tiny format, but still.) Sssshhhh. Stumbled across it earlier and thought might like to know. Sorry for posting this here, but didn't know where else. And, back on topic - great story!
Author's Response:
Hee! Thanks for the tip - now went and watched (and you can just email me next time I guess!) I was trying to hold out b/c I bought a season pass and was going to have to pay for the episode anyway - but I still don't see it listed this AM. I wanted to watch before I wrote another quick little thing...."K" related.
Back on topic...Thanks again!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Reading this was like a little oasis from trying to decide how I feel about last night's developments (re: K & J.)Conflicted much? Lines like: 'Those Halperts...they're insinuous' are such a delightful distraction. Love the book title too - 'egregious misappropriation of seed' may be one of the best phrases I've heard lately. (And don't get me started on its potential naughty applications.) Love the affection between Jim and Janie - a whole new dimension to how delicious he is.
Author's Response:
As I mentioned - all I know of last night is what I've "heard." Jim's too cute to be alone - but damnit if he'll just sit around and pine any longer. Damnit. Damnit. DAMNIT.
I nearly died when I stumbled across those book titles when looking for something for Dwight to equate Jim and Pam too. I googled "devious animals" and viola.
Jim and Janie make me sigh just thinking about him.
Note to Pam - Jim will make the world's most AWESOME dad. Get on that will you???
10 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love how different Kurt is from his parents...Dwight is just priceless in this chapter.
Author's Response: Me too. :) Oh Dwight - will you EVER change????
10 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
lol, i love how kurt tricked dwight :)
Author's Response: He's got quite a head on his shoulders that Kurt. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is so great! i especially love how dwights kid is normal and thinks his dad is wierd just like everyone else. This story is really believable
Author's Response:
I just think that too many "quirks" will spoil the broth - so Kurt gets a free pass. :)
I'm glad you like it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think your take on the Halpert/Schrute messaliance is my favorite:) And, I don't know if you've ever read LM Montgomery's Pat books, but Kurt reminds me of Hilary - I think it's the combination of glasses, awkwardness and crushing on his best friend:)
Author's Response:
I'm a HUGE Anne of GG fan - but didn't read the Pat books. I should based on the love I hold for Anne and Gil.
And I'm glad it's your favorite. I'm having so much fun with this.
9 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
The kids are adorable. And I love the idea that Dwight thinks this is the ultimate prank. Poor boy.
Based on this week's episode, it seems as if Dwight and Angela might be getting away from the altar though. Yikes!
Author's Response:
Hee! Glad you think so. Poor Dwight. He'll never get over what Jim and Pam put him through all those years ago.
I know. Dwangela might end up being a thing of the past. Maybe they'll eventually find their way back to each other.
Like some other "couple" I know.
GRRRRRRRRRR.
10 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2006 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
love this and the kids too.
Author's Response: YAY!!! So happy to hear it!