1 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2023 03:10 am Title: Chapter 1
The baby parts were extremely cute!
Date: October 23, 2010 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just read this story and I really loved it! I loved Olivia and the way Jim acted with her (
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2010 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
SO sweet! You did such an outstanding job of creating perfect visuals in my head!! I felt the dynamic of Jim and Pam was perfect. This left me with a happy feeling!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words and thank you for reading, this is the first fanfic I ever wrote, so it makes me happy to know that people think I did a decent job with it, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2009 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I was re-reading this WELL after I should have been asleep, but I couldn't help it. This is so perfect.
I really can't believe that this is your first fanfic, because it's just so good.
Really, this is perfect, so thank you for helping me to go to my own little dream land, filled with happy Jim and Pam.
Ah.... sleep.... lol.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments. Yes, really truly it was my first one pretty much ever. I've never written fanfic before, but I of course have loved the show FOREVER so that probably helped :) Thank you, thank you, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2009 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
i keep coming back and reading this over and over... it's just so so lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, you don't know how much that means to me! I haven't written anything in ages because of work and school, but hopefully I will be able to get back to this part of my life soon. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2009 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. this is going immediately into my favorites. beautifully written, and you captured their characters perfectly.
and mmmm... wet, naked jim...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And thanks for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2009 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was PERFECT. Wow, the way you described Jim as a dad? Amazing. And the little scene at the end? So adorable! For your first fanfic, you rock!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) And guh, Daddy Jim is going to be HOTT!
10 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2009 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was such a cute story, and an awesome first post. I wish Jim would give me a bath...oops, I can't believe I just typed that...
Author's Response: Haha, me too, me too...
Date: June 19, 2009 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Olivia. I love my little Olivia (at work). She's adorable. She looks nothing like the daughter of Pam and Jim could, but ya know, she's still a total sweetie and I love her to death. Um.... yeah, there was a point to that, but I forget it.
Oh, but yes, baby laughter is so damn addicting. Just their happiness is contageous and... man, its awesome.
One Hand parenting. Yeppers. I've done that. Two hands are overrated. However, I have yet to figure out how to hold baby in one hand, while changing second babies diaper. Must work on that.
Wednesday, I met the hairest baby. She was 11 weeks and had more hair than my 2 year old. But she was still adorable. And I already love her. Even if I only saw her for 15 minutes.
Pam is not stupid. Routines make for awesome babies. And sane babysitters. Just saying.
Hmm... none of the bubble baths I've given my kids have ended up like that.... I guess the fact that I am single and just babysitting may actually have more to do with that than anything else.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I spent all weekend with my little cousins, and Clara is two, that laughter is just amazing! And the simplest things make her laugh but I can't help but laugh too, they're so fun at those ages!rnrnIf you ever figure out the holding one baby and changing another's diaper, let me know. My cousins are still young enough that that skill might come in handy for me too!rnrnI always thought if Pam and Jim ever had a baby, he'd be the more relaxed one and not worry about routines, guess we'll find out soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2009 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved your story so much. It flowed so nicely, and was very realistic.
Cute ending, too. I'd love to see a second chapter
Author's Response: Thank you :) I hadn't thought about5 doing another chapter, but who knows, I might just have to!
Date: April 13, 2009 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I keep re-reading this one! It's so good and well written and beautiful and sweet. I really don't have anything negative to say!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: April 13, 2009 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I keep re-reading this one! It's so good and well written and beautiful and sweet. I really don't have anything negative to say!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the positive comments, it's nice to hear that people like it enough to re-read it! Thank you!
Date: April 07, 2009 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is such a great story! i love the simplicity and sweetness of it. nice job! one thing i would mention is that you paid a little too much attention to the details. you took a bit too long with olivia's diaper change (cute name though!) and jim's first bathtub scene. other than that, i love your choice of words and how you really captured the aura of the characters in this fanfic. for your first one, this is am-ah-zing =)
Author's Response: Thank you :) And I have always loved the name Olivia, so I figured this would be as good a time to use it as any.
Date: March 30, 2009 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
this was BEAUTIFUL, seriously great.. awesome job!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: March 27, 2009 08:00 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really adorable. Wonderful first fic, I hope you do write more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on something new, hopefully it does as well as this one :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2009 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, I too am a stickler for details, and you this one. This fic was sweet without being mushy, and I think you truly captured the spirit of JAM while placing them in a scenario several years down the road. Well done! I can't wait to read more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely didn't want the 'mush', I'm glad you liked it
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2009 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was super!!
and oh, my gosh. so excited to see the name olivia. that's on my list for baby names one day.
i personally think that jim and pam will stick their tongues out until ninety. that will never, ever get old.
bravo! looking forward to more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on something else, so hopefully that lives up to this one...eek!
Date: March 25, 2009 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
So sweet! I loved how you incorporated two bubble baths in this story. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2009 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this. A lot. It was totally sweet and just what I needed on a day like this. Congratulations on an excellent first fic!
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't want it to be too sappy or whatever and so hopefully it's just the right amount of cheese and non-cheese. I'm glad you liked it, thanks!
Date: March 25, 2009 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
This was wonderful! I can't believe its your first story. I loved this little glimpse into their lives. You have a way with detail that makes it so easy for the reader to feel a part of the scene. Thank you for sharing it!
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for your review! I always like reading those one shots and wanted to give it a try myself, I'm glad you liked it, thanks :)rn
10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2009 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1
This was very fluffy and sweet and just what the doctor ordered :) Loved it. My only constructive criticism is that you might want to watch out for repetitive descriptions. Other than that, this was great for a first time fic!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I didn't want to try anything too ambitious for my first fic and thought this would be something simple to get me started but still a story I could tell well. And yes, I see those descriptions you were talking about and will definitely work on that, thank you!
Date: March 25, 2009 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Big congrats on your first fanfic, IThinkWeBrokeHisBrain! I'm feeling so calm right now that I think I might have to recruit you to come to work with me every day! You've created a beautiful, peaceful mood in this sweet fic. Also, I happen to love the name "Olivia." A story that can capture such a sweet image of married, post-baby life is more than OK in my book. Keep up the great work.
One little thing I noticed that you might want to correct: Pam couldn’t get to wait inside to kiss her good night. Did you mean "wait to get?"
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) And yes, thanks for finding the omission. I read it and read it and read it before I submitted, but you know how sometimes you see what you want to see and miss those little mistakes. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2009 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel very lucky to be named Olivia right now! LOL
I normally don't like Jam baby fics, simply because I'm not good at going too far into the future--but I read this one all the way through and I loved every minute. GREAT job!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad it kept you entertained :) I was a little nervous about the future aspect and taking too many liberties with their personal lives since we have no clue about how that will go. When I read the challenge though, literally the first image that popped in my head was Jim and the baby and I just couldn't shake it. And Olivia is one of my favorite names!
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2009 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I AM SUCH AN OFFICE NERD TOO!!!1
I'm not sure you'll find much constructivity (no, that's not a word. I'm channeling Michael, okay, go with it.) but this is def. all compliment.
SO. FREAKING. CUTE!!! gaah. Daddy Jim is too amazing to resist. Um, so is Naked-Bubble-Bath-Running Jim. So, basically, this was made completely of win.
ALSO: I noticed the Michael thing too, although if you go with The Negotiation, it really would have been his 16th Anniversary. And yes, Pam started before Jim. And, goddammit, it is BEESLY.
In other words, those get on my nerves too. I hate inconsistencies.
Author's Response: Good, I am glad to know I'm not alone in my nerd-dom...again with the making up words here but ah well, I think we're in the right place :) And GAH! The inconsistencies! Ah well, still love it. The Pam/Jim thing is the most confusing because the first mention of it ever is Jim saying I had a crush when you first started but every other mention ever indicated Pam was there first.rnrnI am really glad that you liked this story and that it has been so well-received so far, thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2009 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was such a sweet story, IThinkWeBrokeHisBrain. I hope you decide to continue posting stories- I'd without a doubt be reading them! And I really do love your Perfect!Jim here (he cooks, cleans, and is ridiculously adorable- and the last bubble bath, guh).
Seriously, excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am really liking these reviews :) Perfect Jim is nice, isn't he?! I was a little concerned with that part but I figured I could explain it with the art classes Pam was taking and that way there was another reason for him to be so awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am really liking these reviews :) Perfect Jim is nice, isn't he?! I was a little concerned with that part but I figured I could explain it with the art classes Pam was taking and that way there was another reason for him to be so awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am really liking these reviews :) Perfect Jim is nice, isn't he?! I was a little concerned with that part but I figured I could explain it with the art classes Pam was taking and that way there was another reason for him to be so awesome.