Date: January 30, 2023 08:15 pm Title: translucency
I love the idea of Pam talking to her best friend, about her best friend. Such an interesting, different take on their relationship. I just wished the conversation was longer.
1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2019 07:19 pm Title: solidity
I love this. The time jumps are perfect, the emotional beats are on point, and I like Pam's POV. Well done.
10 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2009 04:55 pm Title: solidity
This was so sweet!! :)
Date: May 06, 2009 05:55 pm Title: solidity
What a lovely ending. Thank you.
Author's Response: Since I missed responding to your other reviews (oops!) I'll just give a big collective no, THANK YOU! here (:
Date: May 06, 2009 02:01 pm Title: solidity
I'm glad you finished, because this is beautiful...just like everything else you write, haha. Wonderful job, though!
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you think so, but if we were to be compared you would own me. xD Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2009 12:23 pm Title: solidity
lovely (:
Author's Response: merci :D
7 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2009 07:41 pm Title: liberty
I'm sorry you don't really like this since I really do. As for constructive compliments, hmmm. Not sure what is constructive about my compliments but I really, really hope you continue this. Maybe you will like it more when you get to the "good parts" (wink, wink.)
8 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2009 07:39 pm Title: translucency
Most defintely "yes"! I really enjoyed this - even the part you took from Jenna (which made me hate her, too, when I originally read it).
Date: April 14, 2009 07:22 pm Title: liberty
I love this. I love that it's first person and that you're taking it so far away from the awfulness that really happened between the two of them and making it something happier. I also love that you keep it so in character, and are so realistic with Pam needing time and Jim understanding, like we all know he would. I can't wait to read part three!
Author's Response: I LOVE THE FIRST PERSON TOO! I'm not usually a fan of reading Office first person fics, but I've now written two, so. Merci to you as well! (I'm learning French, aha. Wish me luck.)
Date: April 14, 2009 06:05 pm Title: translucency
Super cute =]
I know you want something constructive, but all i can come up with are compliments! i just love your style of writing! it's just casual, cute, and light!
Author's Response: Aha, merci. The one thing I do like about my writing is the simplicity, and I can't seem to write any other way, so . . . yay.
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2009 05:46 pm Title: translucency
I don't know how you can say you don't like what you write--you're an amazing writer! Great work! :D
Author's Response: I really appreciate that. I'm just way too hard on myself, and a huge perfectionist, so it's never good enough. Thaaaaaaank you muchos-ly :D
Date: April 14, 2009 12:34 pm Title: translucency
yes!! loved it, i want to see more :)
Author's Response: Yay, thanks ^___^
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2009 08:05 pm Title: translucency
I know exactly which line you took from Jenna and I wish she wouldn't say crazy things like that, haha! I like this, nice job :)
Author's Response: I hated Jenna when I read that LOL. Thing is, she has a point. She's just not allowed to say that about Jim and Pam. Thank youu!
Date: April 13, 2009 06:52 pm Title: translucency
Wow. I really liked this. What a bittersweet way to end Casino Night.
Author's Response: I have so many post-CN fics shoved into my brain that I can only hope I can ever get them all down. CN through S3 is my favorite time period for some reason, probably because of the angst-fest. Angst is yummy. Anyway, thanks (:
Date: April 13, 2009 02:06 pm Title: translucency
Yes. Yes yes yes.
More? Please? Pretty please?
Author's Response: More more more will be coming tomorrow (gasp!)
rnI need to go read your new smut now. Like, pronto.
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2009 01:18 pm Title: translucency
guhh, yes.
love it (:
Author's Response: I love when reviews have "guh" or similar sounds in them. To me it's quite the compliment. Glad you enjoyed it (:
Date: April 13, 2009 11:26 am Title: translucency
continue this! i really enjoy the mark and pam bit at the beginning.
Author's Response: I had that convo all worked out in my head last night, actually a lot longer than it ended up, but it was late and bed called and I forgot most of it. I hate it when that happens. But thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2009 10:22 am Title: translucency
Hope you continue this =)
Author's Response: Def. will ^__^ thanks.
Date: April 13, 2009 08:52 am Title: translucency
wonderful, continue with this!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I honestly wasn't sure about this but hey. It's easy to write so I'll keep going. I suck at updating and tend to never finish things . . . but I'll definitely make an effort.