Date: May 02, 2009 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved this! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks, hopefully I'll have it up soon. =)
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2009 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
He glanced at her bare feet. She was right there.
that was my favorite line of the whole thing. absolutely perfect. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Ahh, the innocence, vulnerability, simplicity, sensuality of a pair of bare feet... ;) Thanks for reading!
7 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2009 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh la la, very romantic!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review, kaystar. =)
Date: May 02, 2009 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
beautiful (:
Author's Response: Thanks. =)
Date: May 02, 2009 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Stick with you? As if I could leave! You've got me hooked.
"Ever," he whispered, as if amazed again by what was in front of him. When she breathed out, he continued. "I'm just going to say it. I'm really, really excited. And nervous. But mostly excited." So sweet and perfectly in character IMHO.
So happy you have this new idea...and like it :) I truly can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Ahh, NanReg you are by far my favorite reviewer! Thanks for paying me another visit with this story. =) Hopefully, I'll have the next chapter soon, I'm going to continue on it as soon as I respond to these reviews.
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2009 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Eeee! This was so sweet and adorable, and I was SO happy to see that you're making this a multi-chapter. I absolutely loved the level of comfort mixed with nervous anticipation between them. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks! =) Happy Jim/Pam is just by far my favorite of all. I hope I can do it justice!
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2009 08:17 am Title: Chapter 1
You've got me intrigued..please continue! Can't wait for the the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It has me intrigued as well, hope I can pull it off. =)
Date: May 02, 2009 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nicely written, yanana. Their happiness just made me smile. Looking forward to the rest of this post "The Job" story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. =)