10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2009 06:00 pm Title: Sliding Headfirst
Ohhhh that dress is to cute for words, so I'll just move on to the story :) Something I've enjoyed, are the bits that we "know" about them from the show. The "dork" teasing, fantasy football and the six flags are the things that would have been a part of Jim and Pam, no matter how their story as a couple went. The Ellie moments had me laughing, because they were so real! My 3 year old sister, loved to half-eat her food and then share it with you. By the way, cold french fries aren't that bad once you get used to them :). If your looking for story suggestions, I'd love to see more of these little bits of "family life" and the nice lady in the supermarket again, maybe she could talk to Pam this time....?
P.S. The sign language is great addition as usual, keep up the good work!
Date: September 30, 2009 05:56 pm
Author's Response: Your reviews ALWAYS make my day, they really do. I appreciate the time you take to read my story, but then to write such detailed reviews – you’re a legend!!!
I’m glad you liked the way I incorporated stuff we know from the show into my story – I really am trying to keep this as real as possible (even though it’s AU.)
So happy you like the Ellie moments, feel free to suggest any cute ideas for her. She will be turning one in my next chapter (which is kinda blah right now due to writers block lol.)
I am sooo having Jim, Pam and Ellie stopped off for some groceries real soon, so don’t you worry -)
Thanks again for sticking with me =)
Date: September 28, 2009 07:58 pm Title: Sliding Headfirst
You're such a tease! I expected more kissing and at least some groping by now but no, just one kiss! But the cuteness that is Jim and Pam and Ellie makes up for it, I guess ;o) Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh, don't you worry, that's coming :) We don't want Jim to explode now do we? ;)
Thanks for your review :)
Date: September 28, 2009 07:41 pm Title: Sliding Headfirst
So cute! Their day at the park makes me squee. And I love the chemistry between them at the end! Great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review chick, couldn't do this without you :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2009 08:32 pm Title: Sliding Headfirst
Best. Chapter. EVER!!!
Date: September 24, 2009 02:04 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
I love this story and was hoping you were coming back to it. We always knew Jim would be awesome Dad, didn't we? Keep posting for us PLEASE!
10 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2009 11:21 am Title: Sliding Headfirst
I'm loving this fic! The Jim/Pam banter is awesome, and very in character for the two of them. And how could I not fall in love with Ellie? She's awesome, and so are you, and so is this fic!
PLEASE POST SOON! :)
Author's Response: omg thank you, your review totally just made my night, you're also awesome, thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying this fic and that you think it's in character - that's a big thing for me.
Update soon I hope :)
Date: September 24, 2009 06:13 am Title: Sliding Headfirst
It certainly was worth the wait! I love that you include those bonus gifts at the end. That outfit? Sooo adorable. Really sweet, Sally. This story is guaranteed to make me smile.
Author's Response: Thank you for being my other set of eyes - glad you're enjoying this and that my story makes you smile.
Wasn't the dress cute : )
Date: September 24, 2009 06:07 am Title: Sliding Headfirst
Great chapter, I was so thrilled to see an update! Of course though, I NEED them to have some kind of action here soon. It's so palpable!! Hoping for another update soon :)
Author's Response: I think you'll be happy with the next chapter then :)
Date: September 24, 2009 12:44 am Title: Sliding Headfirst
Write! Write like the wind!!
Author's Response: Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *writes like superwoman*
Date: September 23, 2009 11:02 pm Title: Sliding Headfirst
I'm very, very proud to see my Six Flags joke in print. :D :D
Author's Response: I know, right? Liv IS Pam :)
Date: September 17, 2009 10:19 pm Title: Getting There
Allie--I love this SO MUCH. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Sammmmmmmmmmie. YAY I'm so glad you're reading this and that you're enjoying it. Thank you so much for your review. It really helps to know I'm not writing this for nobody to read lol :)
Done with my next chapter :)
Date: September 07, 2009 12:23 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
HH.... you there?? I miss you....
Do you know that in a mere 5 days it will have been ONE MONTH since you ended Jim and Pam's wonderful date? I kinda wonder what happened...
Come back, please...
Author's Response: Heeey. I promise I'm here. My friend is staying with me until Wednesday so I've not been able to write this week, but my latest chapter is almost finished :) You'll find out what happens next very soon I pinky promise.
Thanks for letting me know you're still here and waiting heee
*writes*
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2009 01:34 pm Title: Getting There
Aw...this chapter was so amazing! I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Working on the next chapter right now :)
Glad you liked it, thanks so much for your review :)
Date: August 26, 2009 12:32 pm Title: Getting There
I have been following this story since you started it and I am really enjoying it keep up hope you update soon
Author's Response: Thanks somuch for your review. I'm working on the next part now :)
Date: August 17, 2009 02:53 am Title: Getting There
Thank you so so much for the update! I was missing this story SOO much!
I loved how their first date went, especially if you consider how the 'we're gonna have dinner together' arrangement was made. It was so adorable, the awkwardness, and teasing, and flirting... all very real to the characters in your story.
How adorable was Ellie as the third party to the date! I've missed her last few chapters and was glad to see her again!
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Aivilo your reviews are always awesome and make me grin like a crazy person, so thank you again.rnrnI'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter - and I have been so looking forward to bringing Ellie back, and I think this was the perfect time, no?rnrnI think Pam's made a new friend =)rnrnHope I wont keep you waiting too long for the next part!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2009 09:05 pm Title: Getting There
YAY! i've been reading this at ALSS, but i'm so glad i found it here! i had been going bananas waiting for this chapter, and now i'm going to go bananas again waiting for the next one!
Author's Response: Heeey,rnAh yes I completely forgot to update this on ALSS, so thanks for reminding me =) I hope I wont keep you so long this time, although I am writing a oneshot instead of working on the enw Ellie pfft, shame on me =)rnrnThanks again for your review. You = awesome!rnrn
9 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2009 05:59 pm Title: Getting There
This is definitely my favorite chapter so far mostly because of Pam meeting Ellie (who's very adorably written).
This part made me laughed: "Is she really asleep?" Pam asked. "No, she's pretending." He teased.
My only complaint is: when will they make out already?!? I need to see tongue action! Do try to make that happen, m'kay? ;o)
Author's Response: YAY for this being your favourite, now I need to OUT DO that and make the next one even better... hmm how can I make that happen? ;)rnrnI hope I've kept the banter between them believable!!!rnrnYAY gonna start work on the next part now!
Date: August 15, 2009 04:36 pm Title: Getting There
Still with you? I don't think you'll be getting rid of me, missy! First off, thanks so much for including the pictures! I love visuals. Jim is such a good daddy. *sigh* What woman wouldn't turn to goo? I mean, seriously?!
Author's Response: YAY I was hoping I'd not lose anyone, but with the time it takes me to update I just wanted to be sure.rnrnVisuals are awesome and I want to give people as much as they need to picture this story as perfectly as i'm seeing it in my head, if that makes sense!!
Date: August 12, 2009 10:18 pm Title: It's all about the woo!
wow, that was adorable! all except for the
"Wow. Do you know how hot you are right now" part. yikes!
anyway, great chapter (except for that one line!) and i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hiyapamelamorganhalpert thanks so much for your honest review, I’m glad you liked this chapter.rnrnRegarding that line you mentioned, I just want to defend it a little and explain to you why I used it – hopefully you’ll read it better afterwards (or not lol.)rnrnI believe that in The Office, as we know it anyway, that isn’t something Jim would say. But the characters I’m writing are slightly more confident than the people we see on the show – Pam especially. I truly believe that if she hadn’t dated Roy for so long, we would have definitely have seen Fancy New Beesly a lot sooner than we did. Where Jim says wow, you’re so hot; Pam has basically turned his brain to goo, it wasn’t meant to be taken as an actual statement. I’ve totally butchered that explanation lmao, but maybe you’ll get what I’m saying, if not just ignore me lol =)rnrnThanks again, I really do appreciate everything you have said! rn
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2009 07:46 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
wow. this is such an amazing story, such terrific detail...i could totally see jim's daughter being a daddy's girl :D great work. please make more? =')
Author's Response: Ohhhh hai new reviewer :) Thanks SO much for taking the time to review Jane it really means so much to me. It sounds cliche but the reviews really do keep me motivated :)rnrnI can't wait to hear what you think of the rest of the story so far :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2009 06:44 pm Title: Getting There
I am still loving this story. Now how about letting these two crazy kids practice their lip reading skills on each other? Love how Ellie responded to Pam, and how Pam was the one to reassure Jim. This is great! Now get back to work!
Author's Response: Yes Boss =) *opens word*rnrnHeeeeeee thank you so much for your review, from you that makes me :DrnrnWorking on the next part tonight, I wish I wasa faster writer grrr :)
Date: August 12, 2009 02:45 pm Title: Getting There
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, too! I'm so glad you have Pam & Ellie getting along from the get-go. Pam's signing thank you to Jim as she left was a really sweet touch!
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter Vampiric Blood I had a lot of fun writing it. They'll be lots more of Ellie and Pam to come and I think you'll really like it - I hope you will anyway :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2009 02:17 pm Title: Getting There
I LOVE this story. I hope you have more soon.... I love learning all the new sign language and this little girl is just adorable
Author's Response: Thanks aimzers84 for your lovely review, it really means a lot, and the fact that you're learning a little sign language at the same time = bonus :)rnrnHopefully I'll have more up really soon!
Date: August 12, 2009 12:45 pm Title: Getting There
I am so sorry that I haven't been more diligent in telling you how much I love this story. I have fallen in love with Ellie. Her signing to Pam was so adorable. This is really keeping me sane during the wait for season 6.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing khand3stooges and yaaaaaaaay for the Ellie love. I want to smoosh her too :) I have so many ideas for this story, so to know you're all still enjoying it makes me =)
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2009 06:51 am Title: Getting There
In case I haven't said it enough, I LOVE this story! The awkwardness and see-sawing emotions are just so real to the characters.The "psyhic dad powers" were a great touch of the banter we all know and love. So glad Ellie's back, her signing "pretty" was just adorable! Take all the time you need to write, this story's too good to hurry:)
Author's Response: Casinos and Coal Walks your reviews always make me smile like a lunatic, so thank you SO much. I'm glad you're still with me and still enjoying it. I have to say I had missed writing Ellie, so I'm also glad she's back :)rnThanks again for being so awesome :)