Date: June 22, 2009 08:02 am Title: These pieces of paper are all I have right now. And I have to deal with that.
They both have FOLDERS. Well, Pam has a wallet, but still! That just shows you how perfect they are for each other. I hope Jim doesn't hurt Karen too much, because I do like her, but if he has to leave her flat to find himself, so be it. I truly can't wait to see where this is headed! Great job! :)
Author's Response: Ah thanks! I was trying to get across that Pam's would be a wallet as she has only just started collecting things whilst Jim has been doing it for years so would have a big file!rnI feel the same re: Karen, not sure how to have her end up happy yet, maybe I'll bring in a twin brother for Jim, lol!
Date: June 18, 2009 06:00 am Title: Confusion. Ilusion. Feel I don't know which way to turn.
Oh. Snap.
Okay, true, I saw the end coming, but I'm oh snapping because I can't wait for the next chapter! I really want to see more of an aftermath, but mostly Pam's reaction. Because Jim has someone in Scranton now, so he's not going to run away. Wait, is he? Aw, geez. Update soon, please!
10 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2009 03:39 pm Title: This is when you're in or out.
You know what's better than an awesome story? An awesome story with quick updates! (No pressure for future chapters!)
Seriously though, another great one. It's getting pretty intense. I wanted to slap Pam! It's Gay Witch Hunt all over again. Only now with serial killers/ potential rebounds waiting right outside the door- ready to pounce! LOL
More soon please :D
Author's Response: Ah thanks! I tend to have quick bursts of writing and get a few chapters done in one go. Then just add them each day! Glad your enjoying, yes it is getting intense, but hopefully in a good way? I hope Karen isn't coming across a pyscho cos kind of wanted to write her in a good light? It's not her fault Jim's hot!
Date: June 16, 2009 03:12 pm Title: This is when you're in or out.
Interesting. I'm curious to see what you're going to do with this.
I really don't think you should turn this into a horror fic. Mostly since I already wrote that one. Well, more of a Scary Movie version, actually.
Though I'm glad someone else has also noticed that Rashida's schtick is basically just to make faces at the camera.
Author's Response: Thanks.rnrnDon't worry I am soo not going to write it as a horror fic! I was trying to get across that Karen was watching him as didn't know what to say/do etc, not that she wants to kill him, lol!
10 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2009 09:16 pm Title: Then I see you and it all falls apart.
this story is amazing! yes, yes, yes
Author's Response: Ah thank you! Just woke up (in the UK) and this has spurred me to write another chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2009 07:58 pm Title: Then I see you and it all falls apart.
"She knew she was lying."
^^Love that.
Date: June 15, 2009 07:04 pm Title: Then I see you and it all falls apart.
yay =]
Date: June 15, 2009 06:27 pm Title: Then I see you and it all falls apart.
I am really enjoying this. I guess I always enjoy seeing Karen getting the ‘short end of the stick’ whenever possible (does that make me a bad person?) Anyway, can't wait to see what you come up in next few chapters.
Author's Response: No I know what you mean! But as I keep writing this I feel like maybe she is just as worthy candidate for Jim in this story? Not sure which way this is going to go yet!
10 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2009 03:43 pm Title: Then I see you and it all falls apart.
Definitely glad you didn't leave it alone! Great chapter. Looking forward to more!
Date: June 15, 2009 02:31 pm Title: Then I see you and it all falls apart.
I'm so glad you continued this! I love this line, especially "carefully constructed," because it just conveys so much:
"He felt as if his carefully constructed ‘Best Friend Jim’ charade had fallen apart as soon as she walked in the door."
I can't wait for chapter three!
Date: June 14, 2009 03:52 pm Title: I've made up my mind. No need to think it over.
Keep it going! I like the three different views on everything.
Author's Response: Thanks! It is tricky writing that way, but I like the effect of it too!
10 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2009 03:14 pm Title: I've made up my mind. No need to think it over.
Ah... unrequited love, really liking this scenario. Great job, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am about to add second chapter!
Date: June 14, 2009 03:09 pm Title: I've made up my mind. No need to think it over.
Though this was a fantastic one-shot, I would love to read more about a possible Pam/Karen friendship from (pretty much) the beginning. And I love the friendship/love triangle thing that's going on. This is DEFINITELY worthy of continuing, and I hope you do!
Author's Response: Ah thanks, makes me so happy that you are enjoying it! I do really like it as a one shot and I am kinda frightened of touching it incase it makes it worse, but I feel there is more to explore and I have an idea for the second chapter, so going to carry on with it! I do think Pam/Karen could quite easily have been friends in S3 if the whole love triangle hadn't got in the way.
10 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2009 01:26 pm Title: I've made up my mind. No need to think it over.
Oh, please continue this! Such an interseting idea. Turning the love-triangle into a love-square lol. Looking forward to more (hopefully!).
And one thing- There`s a typo in the Jim section: `He was already in love with him by the time she told him about her fiancé.`
Again, can`t wait to see where you take this :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Hoping to add 2nd second chapter today!rnCheers for the typo!