Date: September 05, 2009 03:26 am Title: Broke: Time is on my side by thirtypercent
Oh, the prelude to Michael's second call is pure gold! Mythbusters, Dwight, Pam's dismissal of Jim's fantasy! Perfection!
Just love this chapter! Your Michael is dead-on, too!
Date: September 03, 2009 07:22 pm Title: Casual Friday: Birth of a Salesman - by Lovefool
I loved the delicate balance you struck here, with Pam knowing he said something but letting it slide. Two other things I must know: Was the "anything" a shout out to Canary? And was this She sighed, "I like it too," and bit down on her bottom lip as she lowered herself onto his lap. She looked like a woman with the world at her fingertips. He loved that look. the same look Pam had right after Jim laid one on her in Job Fair?
Wonderful story.
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2009 06:42 pm Title: Casual Friday: Birth of a Salesman - by Lovefool
"Shut up so I can teach you."
Best last line ever. You never fail to amaze me LoveFool, this was fantabulous. :)
Date: September 03, 2009 05:38 pm Title: Casual Friday: Birth of a Salesman - by Lovefool
so cute. i love tipsy Pam =]
Date: September 03, 2009 04:04 pm Title: Casual Friday: Birth of a Salesman - by Lovefool
Tipsy and confident Pam is a deadly combination. Oh, Young Jim. There is just so much I need to warn you about. And yet, tragically, I cannot.
Nicely done, LoveFool. I thought that with the title you might be writing more babyfic ;o)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2009 03:46 pm Title: Casual Friday: Birth of a Salesman - by Lovefool
LoveFool, I'm having trouble forming a coherent sentence right now. I looooooooooved this...like Jim loves Pam. ::insert cheesy grin:: Seriously, this was just perfect.
He smiled at her as she came nearer. "I like it when you get close." As soon as I read that, I highlighted it because it was just...awesome. And then my highlighting just kept expanding. So, let me just say that I loved it all. I'm rambling because I'm happy! Thanks so much for taking part in this and for all the glorious fic you've produced this summer.
Date: September 01, 2009 06:28 pm Title: Broke: Time is on my side by thirtypercent
Hiya, thirtypercent! Once again, I am happily surprised to read a different take on this ep. The voices are so clear that I can envision everything you describe. Pam is a saint to actually engage in conversation with Michael in the middle of the night from a dead sleep! The meeting sounds utterly dreadful yet Michael is excited. It's all part of that child-like optimism, I suppose, one characteristic that keeps him from being totally unlikeable : D Nice job!
Date: September 01, 2009 09:06 am Title: Broke: Time is on my side by thirtypercent
It's scary how well you channel Michael, and Pam's reactions are pitch perfect as well. Very cute.
Date: September 01, 2009 07:22 am Title: Broke: Time is on my side by thirtypercent
:)
Date: August 31, 2009 10:47 pm Title: Broke: Time is on my side by thirtypercent
Oh this was great! Your voices are spot on. It's hard enough to do Michael, but I think who's even more difficult is Pam and you absolutely nailed it. That phone conversation where she's asking him all those questions about why he's not asleep...that's vintage Mom-Pam.
Great stuff!
Date: August 31, 2009 06:21 pm Title: Broke: Time is on my side by thirtypercent
What, no acai berry? I'll bet Michael did call Pam at 2 am. Heck, he was picking her up at 5am -- or something.
And yes, Jim must have been annoyed to have Michael invade their lives further once he left DM. Good times.
Date: August 29, 2009 07:55 pm Title: Heavy Competition - Zuzu's Cheetos by: Sweetpea
more please =]
10 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2009 07:04 pm Title: Heavy Competition - Zuzu's Cheetos by: Sweetpea
Lovelyy and a nice bit of smutcakes :)
Date: August 28, 2009 05:57 am Title: Heavy Competition - Zuzu's Cheetos by: Sweetpea
:) great, as usual
Date: August 27, 2009 11:47 pm Title: Heavy Competition - Zuzu's Cheetos by: Sweetpea
Oh Sweetpea...there is just something about your writing that screams: THIS IS TRUE! This has/is really happened/happening! The essence of Jim and Pam is always written so plainly for all to see. Also - you have this amazing ability to write in just a few paragraphs what would take many (including myself) a few pages to write. It's all just right there. No need to go any further. Your Jim and Pam are always crazy in love in ways that are true. No need for grand gestures or extravagance.
And look at Pammy...forgetting that pill not once, but twice. Hmm, wonder if there will be any repercussions. lol
Date: August 27, 2009 08:10 pm Title: Heavy Competition - Zuzu's Cheetos by: Sweetpea
Very, very sweet. I loved this part almost as much as I loved Jimmy Stewart finding Zuzu's petals:
"Jim likes to mess with Pam’s lists. He likes to add things to her grocery lists – things like ASTROGLIDE or PUPPIES! It makes her laugh and also makes her fake being annoyed with him which is almost as good as true affection."
Date: August 27, 2009 08:05 pm Title: 21. Michael Scott Paper Company: The People Pleaser by: Steph
I hadn't read any Erin fic until now and I really enjoyed this. I like the way you've written her, and I hope the actual show writers make her just like this.
Date: August 27, 2009 07:01 pm Title: Heavy Competition - Zuzu's Cheetos by: Sweetpea
This is why I love you so much, Sweetpea. This right here. First off, any reference to It's a Wonderful Life is made of win. Oh, and you're made of win, too. I guess this would be very nearly the time that Miss Pammy gets in the family way, eh? And what a way. Man, I love your smuff. LOVE. IT. I'm giddy, dude. Just plain giddy. Must read again. You're just the balm I need to recuperate from the pics in the JK/EB thread. Bwahahahahaha! But I digress. Thanks. Really. This was sublime.
Date: August 27, 2009 07:00 pm Title: Heavy Competition - Zuzu's Cheetos by: Sweetpea
This is a sweet chapter! I like the kind of frantic pace of it; it captures the overwhelmed feeling you portray Pam as having. I especially like #4 and the beginning of #5.
Date: August 27, 2009 06:55 pm Title: Heavy Competition - Zuzu's Cheetos by: Sweetpea
haha. that was good. i love how it's fragments of a story with the jim and pam component, then switching to a new idea. i really like that style, because after a while some plot lines can get flat. this is a great way to keep up the action, or reality of the story. great job!
Date: August 26, 2009 10:24 pm Title: 21. Michael Scott Paper Company: The People Pleaser by: Steph
I absolutely buy Erin doing these things...I think you've done a great job of fleshing out a character we don't know very well. Gutsy writing! I love it.
Date: August 24, 2009 03:30 pm Title: 21. Michael Scott Paper Company: The People Pleaser by: Steph
YAY Mthe first Erin fic I've read and I loved it. I really hope we get some more Kelly and Erin interaction this season eeep :)
Date: August 24, 2009 08:54 am Title: 21. Michael Scott Paper Company: The People Pleaser by: Steph
Great idea to explore Erin, Steph. I think you've captured her essence here. She most certainly seems like a people pleasure. She and Kelly make quite the quirky little duo. As always, I feel so bad for poor Toby.
Date: August 18, 2009 04:03 pm Title: Two Weeks: I Walked Right Out of the Machinery by: callisto
loved this chapter...and all the things jim found in her desk =]
Date: August 18, 2009 12:01 pm Title: Two Weeks: I Walked Right Out of the Machinery by: callisto
THIS was kind of incredible my dear. Not only completely believable but so poignant. I loved so much about this. Some of those things is pams lasck of inspiration and the fact that it is no lost on Jim at all. Then comes the details...oh the details in this piece are tremendous. The IM thraed after their date? Perfect...jims absolute sadness at her leaving was so pitch perfect and then of course the classic reassurance to Pam that it will all be ok... No to mention his admittance that Michael is an excellent salesman. Ok this could go on forever. LOVED IT!