Reviews For Kaleidoscope
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Reviewer: tizzy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow, this story is so interesting and Creed being cast as the "powers that be", perfect...so is this just going to be like A Wonderful Life, and she gets Jim back? Ooo and what is Jim doing in this Alternate reality? I can not wait to find out! 

Author's Response:

I've never seen It's a Wonderful Life, so... I don't know:) Yeah, I immodestly think Creed is the perfect choice for that part;) Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

No ever make a wish (learned that from
BtVS) cause they do come true.  Can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you:) Ha, maybe Pam never watched Buffy;)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm sensing a theme.  I think we all need to meet up and clobber Pam over the head so she gives us a clue that she realizes what she's missing.

I'm so intrigued by what you've written so far.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I am all for clobbing Pam over the head:D Thanks:)

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 2

oh, no! this story is really different, and i'm really enjoyihg it :) this creed's kinda creepy, but i could really picture him saying that at the end



Author's Response:

I think Creed is always creepy, that's why I picked him to be, well, whatever he is:) Thanks for th review:)

Reviewer: Leely Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

"She tried not to run from the breakroom to her desk, she knew Phyllis was still watching her and she didn't really want people to start thinking she was crazy. Especially since she apparently was."

This is an intensely scary place.  But in a good way!



Author's Response: Without Jim it's always scary:D Thanks;)

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, supervixen! I LOVE that it's the first chapter ofa  story and not a stand-alone fic. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks:) I don't know how long it's going to be, but yes, it's definitely a multi-chapter story:)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Whoa.  This is awesome. (And I'm not a fifteen year old boy, I swear; I just sound like one sometimes.)  Seriously, though - really, really intriguing.  Next chapter?

Author's Response: Thanks:) The next chapter coming soon to the theaters near you:)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1

OK, that last line is VERY intriguing.

Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1

now that was sad. It wasn't a dream from Jim's standpoint that is.  Nice job

Author's Response: Thanks;) I'm afraid it might get a bit sadder even;)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Hmm...Intriguing.  It will be interesting to see where you go from here. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I think the next chapter may turn out even more intriguing;)

Reviewer: Semby Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Really did not expect that! I'm intrigued...


Author's Response: I'm glad you're intrigued:D Thanks:)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is really nice and different. I'm anxious to see what happens next. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar:)

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh, interesting.  Can't wait to see where you go from here!

Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! This is such an awesome premise, and I cannot wait to see where you take this.

PS; Creed is a witch (warlock?)!



Author's Response: Thanks and... you'll see:)

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

i have this strange feeling creed had something to do with this... i guess i've been reading too much harry potter fanfiction :)

Author's Response: I used to read HP fanfics as well, so who knows:)

Reviewer: LittleKidLover Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2006 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow that was great! Totally wasn't expecting that to be a dream.

Loved this fic!!

Author's Response: Thanks:) The story is done yet - there's more to come!:)

Author's Response: ...is NOT done yet, of course:)

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