Date: February 10, 2008 12:14 pm Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain
Awww the package was Jim! LOL! I was touched by Jim's heartfelt confessions...he really has sacrificed a lot. I hope Pam takes care of his heart. ♥
Date: February 10, 2008 12:01 pm Title: Part 2: The Clearing
Aw, poor Karen. That break up was heartbreaking.
Date: February 10, 2008 11:58 am Title: The Thunderstorm
Aw, I am in love with the way you write. I hope you don't mind my spamming you with reviews. I'm sick today and need something to take my mind off my sore throat. =(
Date: October 10, 2006 06:59 pm Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain
Aww, happy ending. Still feel bad for Karen, but Jim and Pam just belong together. I forgot to mention that chapter 1 reminded me of Hinder's Lips of an Angel. Was that intentional?
Author's Response: I have never read it. If it is similar, didn't know it. Sorry. =-( Im new here.
Date: October 10, 2006 06:54 pm Title: The Thunderstorm
Oh no, I can't believe Karen is there! I feel so bad for her...but I'm not a Jim/Karen shipper, so I'll get over it.
Date: October 09, 2006 06:49 pm Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain
Very sweet. I especially liked the cliffhanger ending at the beginning of part 1.
Date: October 09, 2006 09:24 am Title: Part 2: The Clearing
Wow, what an awesome chapter! The break-up was so well done. I like that Karen figured it out before Jim could actually say it. And I loved Karen's last line.
Date: October 09, 2006 07:09 am Title: Part 2: The Clearing
Wow. Amazing. I thought this was a one-shot, but I was pleasantly surprised.
I usually don't review on stuff I like a lot (it's the same principle of only marking questions that are wrong on a test) but you've by far exceeded expectations. Congrats!
Date: October 09, 2006 07:01 am Title: Part 2: The Clearing
Wow. Amazing. I thought this was a one-shot, but I was pleasantly surprised.
I usually don't review on stuff I like a lot (it's the same principle of only marking questions that are wrong on a test) but you've by far exceeded expectations. Congrats!
Date: October 09, 2006 06:54 am Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain
so good! i read the first chapter, ans i was like, "this can't be over!" then i saw there were still two more to go!
Date: October 09, 2006 06:46 am Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain
Now that was a good reunion.
Date: October 08, 2006 10:31 pm Title: Part 3: No sunshine or rain
Very sweet. I hope something like this happens on the show!
Date: October 08, 2006 10:28 pm Title: The Thunderstorm
I loved the little twist at the end.
Date: October 08, 2006 08:18 pm Title: The Thunderstorm
I actually did see that coming. I like Karen, but seriously. It's all about the Jim and Pam. Very nicely done.
Date: October 08, 2006 08:14 pm Title: The Thunderstorm
wow, i didn't expect that ending! you're going to leave this story at that?! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Well...maybe I could do something a bit more....=-)~
Date: October 08, 2006 08:03 pm Title: The Thunderstorm
so good!!!!!
i agree you should continue it :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: October 08, 2006 08:03 pm Title: The Thunderstorm
so good!!!!!
i agree you should continue it :)
Date: October 08, 2006 07:56 pm Title: The Thunderstorm
Wow. Did not see the end coming! Great story. I agree that you should continue it.
Author's Response: Thanks I think I will!
Date: October 08, 2006 07:08 pm Title: The Thunderstorm
Great ending! Poor Karen. I wish you would continue it
Author's Response:
THANKS! So you think its the good basis for an ongoing story? That might work...(strokes chin evilly) =-)