Date: June 30, 2009 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I love reading Drunk!Jim fics because you never know quite how far his guard will go down. I really enjoyed this one - the title was perfect for what she was doing to him. This was my favorite part:
Roy," she says flatly, her finger still hanging in the air.
"An impression of Roy?" he asks, eyes darting toward the window as if he might walk in and discover their cove.
"Yeah, dare you," she replies, her eyes sparkling with the random colors in front of them. Her eyes sparkle anyway when she wants to smile and just can't hold it in. He tries to watch her eyes when she mentions Roy's name, wondering if they brighten up like she can't get enough of him. Like she loves him senseless. He wonders, drunkenly, how much she loves him. If she knew the extents that love could reach, even if the person on the other end had no idea.
She has no idea.
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! A new one from you makes me happy! You always manage to hit the nail on the had with these two. Your writing is so in character and it almost makes my heart break for him. So good.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. =)
Date: June 29, 2009 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
mmmm i could taste the tequila and salt. GREAT job :)
Author's Response: Thanks. =)
Date: June 29, 2009 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay for angst and drunk Jim :)
Author's Response: Ah, drunk Jim, I'm going to need one.
6 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like that, not as good as 'two', but still good. i liked it up until she asked him for an impression of roy. after that, i think it was a little confusing, what the intentions of their words were.
i think if you wrote another chapter that would help to ease the confusion, so we can see what it supposed to happen next.
nonetheless, this story DOES have a lot of potential. nice job, and consider writing another chapter - along with a seventh for 'two'!
Author's Response: We're gonna blame it on the a-a-a-a-a-alcohol for much of both of their decisions in this fic. ;) This fic is just a little oneshot, stuck in the backwoods of their friendship, in theory before the series even started. Probably no second chapter for this one. Sometimes I love a good fic that begs for a second chapter. For example, "Australia" by Erileen. That one will make you want a second chapter like no other! Almost heartbreakingly so.rnrnThanks for reading, and leaving a review. And there's still some "Two" to come, hopefully soon. =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
First - I so read this without the comma He swallows, his finger - and was like he swallows his finger? Oh dear that entertained me more than it should.
I loved this so much. I am so happy I have discovered your fics because you're awesome and amazing. You capture both Jim and Pam perfectly.
ENCOREEEEEEEEEE :p
Author's Response: Funny you say that because as I was typing it I was like, "Eh, that might sound weird..." Glad you read it twice and got it right, I could've stuck another word in there to have it make more sense, lol.rnrnThanks for the review. You guys make me blush. =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 10:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really loved that, so descriptive.
Author's Response: Thank you. =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2009 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1
lovely (:
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: June 29, 2009 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay for inspiration! Keep 'em coming, sister! I also notice a Drunk!Jim trend here...
P.S. It seems that you've repeated a paragraph ("He can feel the tell-tale heat rising up in him again..."
Author's Response: Isn't drunk Jim great? What I wouldn't give to have one of my own. ;) Ahh, yes, I retyped a paragraph because I mixed up the tenses and didn't delete it haha .. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. =)