Date: August 04, 2009 05:55 pm Title: Round and Full
This is awesome! I'm so glad you are continuing with it in so much detail! The line, "I can't wait to meet you," had me gushing! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I wrote that last line around 1am this morning, so I'm glad it isn't just the musings of a sleep-deprived crazy person!
Thanks so much, Dedeen.
Date: August 04, 2009 05:44 pm Title: Round and Full
Awww. That was so sweet. Yes, I believe that Jim would (will) be THAT perfect. Tending to Pam's every need and lovingly so.
This story is making me even more excited for Season 6 to begin. Only 44 days, 00 hrs, 16 mins, 05 secs! ;-)
Anxiously awaiting Chapter 3!
Author's Response:
Thanks Abigail :-) It's so fun writing Jim because I can make him do whatever I want...with Pam.
Some fun things will be happening in chapter 3, so stay tuned!
Date: August 04, 2009 05:38 pm Title: Round and Full
Have you ever read a story that was just too perfect for words? And then you sit there for a minute reeling at how amazing it was? I just got that feeling reading this, way to go. Looking forward to more of this high-quality perfection!
Author's Response:
Wow. You just made my heart soar with the eagle's nest with your review. What an amazing compliment. Thank you so much, pmh!
I guess I'd better get working on chapter 3!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2009 05:08 pm Title: Round and Full
Awww. This chapter was sweet, too. It actually took me a few minutes to remember Mark was, but I'm glad you brought him back.
I love that Jim is the assistant to the pregnant person.
I'm glad you're giving them a little girl. If that becomes canon, she'll be a Daddy's Girl for sure.
Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping that Mark makes a return for the wedding this year. I like the idea of Jim having friends outside of the office.
I also love the idea of Jim having a little girl. ::swoon::
Thanks for your review and stay tuned, there are some exciting things in store for the Halperts in the next few chapters ;-)
8 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2009 09:39 am Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
Very cute amd poor Pam - being all huge and pregnant and having to deal with Michael talking about her boobs lol.
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Yes, poor Pam. I'm sure she'll get a lot of grief this season!
Thanks for loving it and reviewing!
Date: August 01, 2009 07:34 am Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
Hey there, Beeswax! I nearly missed this. So glad Abigail recommended it on the forum. Great chap. You're preaching to the choir about Braxton Hicks contractions. I remember them well. Great characterizations. I'll look forward to the next chap!
Author's Response:
I'm glad Abigail recommended it too! She.is.so.great.
I had Braxton Hicks contractions all the time. I guess we were both part of that special club. Yay us ;-) Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2009 11:15 pm Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
I love the little details in this, like Jim placing his hand on her lower back and holding out his arm to her. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Just thinking of Jim being so attentive with Pam makes me swoon a little, so I'm glad you liked it too. More to come soon!
Date: July 31, 2009 08:38 pm Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
Now you've made me even more excited for 9/17! I'm positive Meredith is going to make crass comments, considering that she's the only other "mom" in the office.
And yeah, I remember that bowling ball feeling quite well, so you definitely nailed it there, ha!
Looking forward to more fun with this story while we wait for it to be enacted for real on the show!
Author's Response:
First of all, I "definitely nailed it there"? twss
Secondly, thanks for reading and reviewing. I am also excited for 9/17 and I really hope this helps us both pass the time before then.
Date: July 31, 2009 07:46 pm Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
Bwah! I bet we hear something just like this from Michael. At least one joke about her having had sex at some point (duh) and some definite boob jokes. I expect one each week once Michael knows. Well done, Bees!
Author's Response:
Thanks lisahoo! I'm hoping a drinking game can be developed based on Michael's inappropriate pregnancy jokes with Pam this season :-)
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2009 07:03 pm Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
YAY! Not only a new fic from Beeswax, but an awesome one at that! I had to contain my giggles while reading. You NAILED it!
Meredith and Michael were SPOT ON and so were Jim and Pam. (So sweet the way you write those two.)
Great job with the pregnancy stuff. Very true to life and great job with the Office stuff. Very true to the show.
Can't wait for chapter two!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, my friend. I was getting antsy about S6 starting and reminiscing about my birth story to someone and got inspired.
I'm tinkering with chapter two right now, so I hope to get it up soon. Thanks so much for your review and recommending it on MTT. *huggy hugs*
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2009 05:46 am Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
I love this fic so far. It's very good. I'm choosing to believe Meredith on what she said here, considering she did have two kids.
Michael was acting very Michael-ish, but he was very sweet about the pregnancy glow.
I also love that Jim's trying to help Pam.
Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! One of my favourite things about the character of Michael is his ability to be so offensive one minute and then sweet the next. Oh, and Jim trying to help Pam is very dreamy to me, so I hope it is to everyone that reads this too!
The next chapter is on it's way :-)
Date: July 31, 2009 12:10 am Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
loved pam angry at michael, and the line about jim so lovingly brewing the decaffeinated tea, adorable! some great lines from the characters you included.
can't wait for the next chapter, and my only suggestion is to try adding few more characters to the dialog's. other than that, nice work and i loved all the details!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comments and I'm glad you are enjoying it! I appreciate your suggestion. I toyed with adding Creed into the Meredith discussion but the conversation just didn't flow the way I wanted it to. I'll keep your suggestion in mind, though.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2009 09:52 pm Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks Ollie! More to come soon :-)
Date: July 30, 2009 08:00 pm Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
first off thanks for allowing me to beta for you :)
You know how I feel about where you're going with this. I'm so excited to see how you're blending our Jim & Pam with the next steps they're taking.
Brava chica, brava!
Author's Response: Well thank you, m'lady, for your kind words and beta-ing. Thanks also for suggesting that I flesh out the kitchen scene. You can never have enough "doting Jim" in a pregnancy story, right? ;-)
Date: July 30, 2009 07:24 pm Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
I love the Pam pregnant fics and Jim being just awesome. I can't wait to see more! This will make waiting for season six so much harder now! I can't wait!
Author's Response:
I know! I can't wait to see what stage of pregnancy Pam is in when Season 6 starts. Hopefully this will help pass the time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: July 30, 2009 07:18 pm Title: 35 Weeks on Friday
:-) thanks for blessing us with this wonderful story.. i'm really, really, excited to see where this will go!
Author's Response: Awww, thanks JHalpert. Stay tuned for more pregnant Pam and daddy-to-be Jim!