9 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2009 07:53 am Title: Crashing, Smashing, but Calm Sometimes
Yeah- More chapters! I thought it was jus the two. Where can Jim have been and how is he going to stay "just friends" when she's been calling him all day? He's got to realize she wants more right? And when will Pam stop ignoring her real self? Waiting for the answers.... :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comment! I'm working on the next chapter...thank god that they both realized their mistakes!!
Date: August 13, 2009 01:55 pm Title: Crashing, Smashing, but Calm Sometimes
nice chapter, sorry i didn't review on the last one, i'll be honest i didn't like it nearly as much as this one. i look forward to seeing how jim's day went - why was he not at work though? you're probably taking a creative license and coming up with your own plot - duh!
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting on this one, I'm glad you enjoyed it more! The first chapter was more of an intro, just to show Jim's feelings. And yes, I will be taking a creative license and coming up with my own plot to see where Jim was! rnAnyway, thanks so much for the comment!
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2009 11:28 am Title: Crashing, Smashing, but Calm Sometimes
This story is amazing! I loved this second ch. so much. You really did a great job showing what it much have been like for Pam. How hard it must have been to lie to herself about her feelings for him. I can't wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I really appreciate it! The next chapter will be out soon, I hope!
9 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2009 06:34 am Title: Waves; that's what we are
This is one of the best Booze Cruise pieces I've ever read. You just know how Jim must have felt, I can't wait to read your take on Pam.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Wow! Pam's part will be up later today / tonight.