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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was sad and then happy and I can't wait to see what's next!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

very nice - you could really feel her frustration with him!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 06:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful idea for how we'd like it to be. Maybe the writers will get the hint.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 10, 2006 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a good first fic.  Congratulations! :) It was a sweet story.   The only little thing is that you tend to switch your verb tenses, which can be distracting.  If you need help with that or to get some input on any other matter before you post your story, we have tons of nice beta readers, who are just too happy to help with all matters of pesky details. :)  Hope you write some more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've always had an issue of switching my tenses from past to present. I went in and changed it up a bit....and thanks for letting me know about the beta readers. I will definitely utilize that group for next time. Have a good day.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww...that's really sweet. 

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