Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2010 07:58 am Title: Pam - Season 3 I’m waiting everyday for you to come home.

i loved this chapter! keep it up. i can't wait for season 4 JAM!

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2009 08:49 am Title: Pam - Season 2 - When I kissed him, it was like a thousand burting stars.

I love this one and think you did a great job, for 2 reasons in particular. When I read these lines, (especilly the early ones) I feel like something is hidden, like I still don't know all that was going on in Pam's head. And to me that is Pam at the very core of her character. I mean the whole reason behind the Casino Night angst was that Pam is never completly honest, even with herself. And the second thing I'm not sure if you meant to do it, but it seems like even the pattern of the summeries reflects her. Some are a little more lighthearted, a little closer to the surface. And then you have these few mixed in, that pinpoint a moment of her vulnerability. Sorry if this is too much, you did say you liked long reviews right? :)

Author's Response: I'm sorry this is so late! But wow, Casinos and Coal Walks. Thank you. I tried to make some lighthearted and some obvious, so I'm glad you picked up on that. The "Sexual Harassment" 'secret' definitely had a lot of weight and I wanted to show that sometimes Pam has no idea what is going on inside her own head. In that episode, we see that Pam talks about Jim and even her mother has figured it out, but she's still living in this "Monday to Friday friendship" bubble she created for herself and doesnt want to face her feelings. I like long reviews the way Jim likes Italian food. :) Thanks again.

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2009 10:27 am Title: Jim - Season 2 I never got the chance to tell you how beautiful you are.

Wow, I'm really impressed how quickly you got this chapter out, considering how intense this season was. It's funny, I feel like Jim loved Pam forver, but at the start of Season 6 they'll have been apart 3 seasons and together 3 seasons. (If you can count the first season as a real season) So why does seems like it took them so long ot get together? No complaints, about the length of your replies, I love to read them, I can always appreciate a story more if I feel like I know the author. Now if my reviews get too long, feel free to say so, I know I talk to much:)

Author's Response: Haha, as much as I would love to say that I managed to crank this out in a matter of days, I started writing season 2-Jim before season 1. It still took a while because I spent time on season 2-Jim while doing season 1 of both Jim and Pam. Season2-Pam definitely will take a while because she was a little harder to read and less obvious than Jim was(which you pointed out in your last review :) ). Wow, the time line never occurred to me. I guess when there is pain and heartache involved time seems to slow so the pain is evident. I LOVE long reviews. The longer the better, I feel like I'm getting know the reviewer as well as what they like to see in the writing.

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2009 05:34 am Title: Pam - Season 1

Number 2 made me smile, number 3 was funny and number 6 just took my breath away, it's that poigent. Jims' feelings are obvious to the viewer most of the time, even if he won't admit them. Pam's may be harder to write, but I kind of like them more.

Author's Response: Thank you Casinos and Coal Walks[have I mentioned that I love your name?.. cuz I do. :)]! Wow, high praise for Hot Girl, I'm glad you liked it. I agree, that's what makes Jim easier to write. He's just hiding behind jokes but as an audience, we see through it. Sorry for the long-winded response, I talk too much. :) Thanks again.

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2009 11:19 pm Title: Pam - Season 1

This is a really quirky and unique idea that to be honest, I was unsure of at first but I think so far you've done both of them incredibly well (especially Pam). The statements for the Alliance and Hot Girl were really powerful. Good stuff :) I look forward to the rest of the seasons!

Author's Response: Thank you MilkandSugar. I'm glad you like it so far and think I'm doing them justice. The Alliance and Hot Girl were definitely my favorite to write so I'm really excited that they were well perceived. Hopefully the rest won't disappoint. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2009 07:21 pm Title: Jim - Season 1

I think this is a cute idea, esp. if you continue to do all of s2 one chapter, all of s3, all of s4, etc. It's fun :)

Author's Response: Thank you, Liv! I wasnt sure if I was going to split the seasons up into twos or leave them as one, so you just made that decision a lot easier. Thanks. :)