10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2009 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story made my heart sigh. Thinking about the episode when Pam first mentioned that she wanted a house with a terrace to now, when they're expecting and getting ready for the wedding...and then read this story by you, I'm feeling pretty sentimental right now over these two. You have such a way with words, bebitched, that makes me want to linger over and savor this story.
Also, what you wrote at the end was just perfect. *sigh*
Thank you so much for writing this (and for the names of the songs). As always, excellent, excellent job!
Date: September 16, 2009 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, bebitched, this is elegant and beautiful. You've captured so many poignant moments so poetically. Thank you.
Date: September 15, 2009 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Those were some great moments (and I knew most of the songs). Just a sweet trip through their life in the house. :) Beautiful!
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2009 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is just the loveliest thing :)
8 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2009 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was just lovely. I really liked this line:
"Her terrace. The one she’d been picturing all those years ago in a tiny, sunless office in front of a probing camera, its Cyclops lens staring at her crumpling face unerringly, flashing red like it was angry at her for not having all the answers."
Date: September 14, 2009 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really loved this story, and i loved it more for the inclusion of ingrid michaelson lyrics! she's my favorite artist ever. and this story reminded me of her music, and so it's doubly cool.
rock on.
9 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2009 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bebitched, thank you for this lovely snapshot of life Chez Halpert.
Date: September 14, 2009 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow this is gorgeous! Amazing writing, loved the transitions!
Date: September 14, 2009 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1
wonderful. i always love your stories.