1 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2021 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1
This unique and brilliant!
1 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2020 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I kinda love this.
Date: September 21, 2009 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
this is nothing short of freaking amazing. the last line was perfection. you are way too good at this. i wish i was in tune enough with a quirk to write creed. brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks! Finally, my clinical oddity comes in handy!
8 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2009 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. The "Jacko" and "Paula" cracked me up. The last line gave me cold chills!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 16, 2009 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great little read; great voice. When I finished, I said aloud (though nobody was around to hear), "That is ballsy!"
Author's Response: Thanks! I do try to strive for testicular fortitude.
Date: September 16, 2009 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha. loved this. it was so creed. although creed sad the quote this was based off of to andy, oh man love the idea of creed giving jim advice. so great
Author's Response: Haha, but remember what he says to Andy? "Have I ever steered you wrong, Jim?" So Creed giving Jim advice might be more canon than we originally suspected...
Date: September 16, 2009 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. That's so...creed. Absolutely amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 16, 2009 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
So Creed is JFK? Awesome. I really love it and seems like this totally could have happened!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: September 16, 2009 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry, I just have to comment one more time, because I've been re-reading this one part over and over again and laughing hysterically and realized I didn't even mention it in my review:
This is how Creed does what he does best now, but he wishes it were different. He wishes he still could do what he used to do how he used to do it, with the crowds and the speeches and the waving. God, he loved the crowds.
hahahaha
Author's Response: What can I say, Creed has his hidden passions. Thanks so much!
Date: September 16, 2009 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Very clever!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 16, 2009 09:47 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG, this is brilliant. Love it. Totally made my morning better. (And on a personal side note, my given name is actually Paula, and all of my life people have been calling me Pam - so yeah, that part was especially funny to me)
Author's Response: I'm glad this story had a personal touch! Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2009 09:22 am Title: Chapter 1
LMAO! Jacko...Paula the receptionist...I burst into hysterical laughter at my desk.
“A man does what he must - in spite of personal consequences, in spite of obstacles and dangers, and pressures - and that is the basis of all human morality.” Creed laughs a little bit. “I wrote that, once.”
^^ Brilliant. Sheer brilliance. Gosh, I love Creed...:D
Author's Response: "Profiles in Courage." Creed never needs a ghostwriter. Thanks so much!