Date: January 03, 2010 06:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Sophia was one of my favorite names for a baby. Then I met the world's fussiest baby named Sophia. And now it's more like "Sophia! Just please be quiet, two seconds, please!" She doesn't really listen.
Besides that minor fact (which doesn't distract from the story), absolutely lovely!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I love that story. I'm glad you liked this!
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww,this is such a sweet piece. I'll have to check out your other stories. JAM as parents are just to cute for words. I can't wait to see them for real this season!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you thought it was sweet.
JAM as parents is going to be awesome. I can't wait for Baby Tuna's arrival.
Date: September 30, 2009 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
no problem, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I don't know if I'll add to this specific universe, but there will definitely be more JAM with babies fic. Or just JAM fic.
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2009 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the name Sophia :) Very cute indeed!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Sophia is a favorite name of mine, and I've had an idea in my mind for weeks where JAM had a daughter named that. I couldn't let it go, so Sophia Alexis Halpert was born in this fic! Thank you for thinking it's cute! I think it is too.
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2009 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
very sweet. i love sophia's name, i think it's my favorite of all the baby names i've read in stories! my only quick critique is for you to watch the dialog. try saying it out loud as you write, it might help to make it a bit smoother. great job, and keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like Sophia's name and that it's one of your favorites.
I will definitely take your advice about the dialogue! Thank you so much for the concrit.