8 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2009 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a lovely little look at two characters that so rarely interact in conventional ways. I enjoyed it very much.
Date: October 04, 2009 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really nice. I always love it when Pam and Dwight are kinda sorta friends, and that's why The Secret (and also The Job) will forever be among my favorite episodes. And it's always nice when someone explores these unseen moments in a way that's well written and in character. Great job. Write more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I also love those episodes. And "write more" is one of the nicest compliments an author can get.
Date: October 03, 2009 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this was sweet and funny. Love seeing the interaction between these two explored, especially after one of the best episodes of all time! Their voices in that first scene are especially great.
Author's Response: I agree completely -- The Injury is easily my favorite episode, partially because of the weird, quirky Dwam friendship. Thanks!
Date: October 03, 2009 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pam and Dwight are a unique paring, Chardin--funny and quirky. This cracked me up: "Dwight’s car smells like manure and pineapple air freshener." : D Nice job!
Author's Response: LOL, I like describing car interiors for some reason. Thanks!
Date: October 03, 2009 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great, you've got the characters so right! I laughed a lot. Write more!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I like to hear.
Date: October 03, 2009 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
This turned out wonderfully. I really love this story. I'm so glad I got to beta it, and you better write more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for everything, Emily. My first fic here has been a wonderful experience! And yes, I have a new five-chapter fic in progress...it's not Dwam, but it is Dwight.
Date: October 03, 2009 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Well this was nice. I have a special place in my heart for Dwam.
Author's Response: Me too! Thanks a bunch.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love Dwight and Pam interaction, this was great...any chance you'll do more 'what the cameras didn't catch' moments from other episodes? Your Dwight was pretty much spot on.
Author's Response: Oh, you have no idea what a lovely compliment that is. Dwight is a darn tricky character to write, and I'm so glad you think he's spot on. I'm rather a fan of non-conventional pairings (especially Dwam), so I'll doubtless be publishing more in this vein.
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nice. i loved this side of dwight, still all business-like and stiff, yet kind, too. congrats on making this so realistic, and i don't think i read a single error or typo!
sorry this is so short and vague i'm just really tired, but i wanted to make sure you got a review great job, Chardin!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so very glad you find it realistic. And typo-free is always the goal!