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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2009 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Haha,I loved this. Michael Michael Michael. I'm tempted to think he actually needs a real child so he stops with Jim and Pam... but then I'm afraid to think of making a little child suffer with Michael Scott as a father!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2009 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey, this wasn't the least bit stupid!  I loved it, it was so perfectly Michael, getting caught spying on them, and then not to even be at the right room. I think it was very creative and very good!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2009 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Michael. Perfect, awful, Michael. Love it.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

i have to tell you that i keep thinking that i've seen some spoiler and this is actually part of the wedding episode. just wanted to share that with you - this is probably the most memorable piece i've ever read!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. =) I love that it sticks with you!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2009 04:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Very, very cute, thank you for adding to the anticipation of Thursday. I absolutely loved this line, because it is so perfectly in character: Jim leans against the doorway. "I'm just going to wait until I see you on the elevator."

Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review. =)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 05, 2009 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Yanana, you're a mind reader!  If I were a writer, I would tackle this very subject.  Of course, your version is much better than anything I could dream up : D  So, thanks for granting my wish without even knowing it!  This was adorable and so in character (as always).  I'm still grinning--and hoping that maybe we get to see a scene like this play out in a few short days.  ::crosses fingers::

Author's Response: Mind reader/wish granter. Eh, sure, why not? ;) I can't waaaaiiit for the wedding tomorrow. Thanks for the review, it's always lovely to hear your thoughts [b]NanReg[/b]. =)

Reviewer: SyK Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05, 2009 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Michael... He would totally do that. And then try to play it cool and fail miserably and be all difficult and agravating and somehow so impossible not to love at the same time.

This "silly" little fic was exactly what I needed to break the tedium of work. I have now had a good laugh and I'm ready to face the rest of the day. Almost, anyway.

Author's Response: Glad I could help. ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2009 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

lol. this was hilarious. so completely and utterly michael, to try and spy on the honeymooning couple, and get caught. ahh, i can totally see that happening! keep going, if you aren't already, i can't remember if this was complete or not. great job as always yanana!

Author's Response: Ha, it's complete. I'm sure there's endless possibilities as "consequences of an open bar" for their coworkers, though. Poor Jim and Pam! Thanks for the review. =)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2009 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

"I'm just going to wait until I see you on the elevator."

Jim FTW!

Oh, Yanana this was all kinds of awesome. I ccould totally see this happening and I LOVED that he was at the wrong room. This reads like canon. Kudos!



Author's Response: Thanks [b]lovefool[/b]. =)

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2009 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

So perfectly Michael! I love how the old man came out of the door he 'wasn't' spying on. HA! Your stories are always a treat, yanana

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you liked. =)

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2009 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha! I don't know what I like more, 215 or "it's like his son just got married" such perfect Michael moments. The Office is a comedy so your story may be more realistic then you think:)

Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, Michael. I can't wait to see what he has in store for tomorrow. I'm sure it will be sweet and totally inappropriate at the same time no doubt. ;)

Reviewer: Sarah42 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2009 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait. Can't wait! That's all. :P

Author's Response: 29 hours left! =)

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