7 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2009 09:15 pm Title: Change of Scenery
Very nice! I loved "298 miles to forever". Sigh...
Author's Response: Thank You for reviewing! I thought I was in a sappy mood when I wrote that, but now that the weddings aired? I am a complete mess. I keep watching the wedding dance clip and tearing up when they exchange vows on the boat. How are we supposed ot face a normal work week now?:)
Date: October 08, 2009 01:20 pm Title: Change of Scenery
Very nice emotional picture here. Love it! Can I nitpick, though? It's more "than" friends, not more "then". Your story is so short that every little piece is important- I don't want anyone to be distracted by a typo!
Author's Response: My sister is my editor, and she's usually quite the grammer snob. I guess having her, has made me lazy! Thanks for the review and the nitpicking:)
Date: October 05, 2009 05:43 am Title: Change of Scenery
Adorable and well done. (It's amazing how much can be conveyed in these 55 word things.) The last line is perfect.
Author's Response: Thank You so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: October 04, 2009 10:52 pm Title: Change of Scenery
Aww Scranton to Niagra Falls :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I can't wait for Thursday!
Date: October 04, 2009 10:37 pm Title: Change of Scenery
awwww...Nicely done.
Author's Response: Yeah! I was going for the Awwwww effect, so I'm glad you think I succeeded. Thanks for reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2009 08:42 pm Title: Change of Scenery
You've really packed a lot of emotion into 55 words. Short, but amazingly sweet and smile educing.
Author's Response: You just made my morning! Thanks so much for taking the time to review.