Date: November 02, 2009 05:11 pm Title: We Can Go Anywhere, Take Your Hand, Come With Me
lmao. frank and beans. so perfect. although i think frank and benny were intended to be a gay couple, but maybe that's just me.
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I am so disappointed that I didn't think about Frank and Benny being gay!! That would have been so much better!
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2009 04:59 pm Title: We Can Go Anywhere, Take Your Hand, Come With Me
absolutely yay! this was so exciting, our first introduction to frank and beans! please keep going, i'd love to see their bio bay excursion. great job with this chapter and i can't wait to read more!
Date: November 02, 2009 08:46 am Title: We Can Go Anywhere, Take Your Hand, Come With Me
So sweet :D
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2009 08:00 am Title: We Can Go Anywhere, Take Your Hand, Come With Me
Great chapter! This part is the best: Pam took a deep breath. “I don’t know… I just… sometimes I get so scared because what if one of us had done… or said… one thing differently. We might not be here at all. I mean, I know that we are, but it still scares me that we were so close to… you know… not being here.”
That is absolutely something I imagine them talking about on their honeymoon! Good job, can't wait for more! Definite YAY!
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2009 01:08 pm Title: I'ma Take You There So Don't Be Scared I'm Right Here, Ready?
YES! that was absolutely perfection at the level of perfection. that makes no sense, but seriously - amazing job. i love the rings, the tickets the story, your writing, this chapter and all that jazz. adorable ending, by the way.
So happy MTT is working now, too!
Date: October 21, 2009 05:40 pm Title: Feel the Melody and the Rhythm of the Music Around You
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10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2009 10:10 pm Title: Feel the Melody and the Rhythm of the Music Around You
woo hoo! that was very good. i love the sanity and the sexiness. great job! sorry i have to be so brief. still doing homework. at 10:08. a end somewhere on the horizon...
great job! can't wait for the next chapter - these honeymoon stories are fabulous. just an idea - check out 'the most boring honeymoon ever' for honeymoon week ideas. another great story too.
let me know if you want some beta help - but you seem to do very well on your own. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2009 09:56 pm Title: Feel the Melody and the Rhythm of the Music Around You
Aww, very cute!!! =) Great job as always, keep it up!!
Date: October 13, 2009 02:19 pm Title: Tonight Is The Night, You'll Join Me In The Middle Of Ecstasy
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10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 04:32 am Title: Tonight Is The Night, You'll Join Me In The Middle Of Ecstasy
Great story! I hope you continue it. Those vows you wrote were so sweet!
Date: October 13, 2009 04:27 am Title: Tonight Is The Night, You'll Join Me In The Middle Of Ecstasy
This was such a moving chapter...Those are the vows we missed hearing - I can picture them saying them and have to admit I even teared up a bit. You're a great writer... I hope you keep adding. I know I'd like a little reception and even a little honeymoon, even though we didn't get one to see - we have to dream, right?
Date: October 13, 2009 01:20 am Title: It's You and Me, Moving At The Speed Of Light Into Eternity
I loved Jim playing soccer with his nephew hee :)
Very cute!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2009 08:35 pm Title: Tonight Is The Night, You'll Join Me In The Middle Of Ecstasy
I promise that I will never run away from you again. No matter how hard it gets. I will dry your every tear and try everything I can to make sure that I am not the reason for those tears. I will support your every decision, no matter how crazy it seems at the time. I will love you every single minute of every single day.
*sniffs* That's all a girl needs, really.
Date: October 12, 2009 08:22 pm Title: It's You and Me, Moving At The Speed Of Light Into Eternity
Wow, how did I not notice that??? They do fit well, I guess I just didn't have faith that Chris Brown could write mature, realistic and nice sounding lyrics to a song that relate to life. (as you can tell, I'm not the biggest fan of his, but that doesn't really matter. 'Forever' was a good song the way it was used in the Office!)
Date: October 12, 2009 08:15 pm Title: Tonight Is The Night, You'll Join Me In The Middle Of Ecstasy
LOVE this story. Such great vows. Ugh I can imagine it happening. Can't wait to read more!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2009 08:07 pm Title: Tonight Is The Night, You'll Join Me In The Middle Of Ecstasy
Nice job with Jim's vows, I think you found the perfect combination of both of our opinions. This turned out great, and email me when you want help with chapter 3. Also, where are you finding the chapter titles? Are they from the song Love You Lately that was played in the promo? Just curious - I really like them!
Author's Response: The titles are actually from "Forever" by Chris Brown. I thought that they were a perfect fit!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2009 02:38 pm Title: It's You and Me, Moving At The Speed Of Light Into Eternity
Awww...that was so sweet! :) Jim is amazing!!!! I want one!!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2009 11:09 am Title: It's You and Me, Moving At The Speed Of Light Into Eternity
My first thought when I finished this was I didn't remember Pam saying that line. Then I realized that you had stopped quoting the episode halfway through the story! I love things that fill in one of their 'hidden moments"! and it was such a seamless transition, I can't wait to see chapter two.
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2009 08:40 pm Title: It's You and Me, Moving At The Speed Of Light Into Eternity
I love your story and this part so much in the episode, it was so sweet of Jim to cut of his tie for her. I can't wait to see more of your story!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2009 07:04 pm Title: It's You and Me, Moving At The Speed Of Light Into Eternity
So, so lovely. Especially this part:
Right now, she felt like she was on the verge of an emotional breakdown and the only person she wanted to see was her best friend. And he was the one person she wasn’t supposed to see. But she didn’t care. That’s why they were getting married right? Because in times like this, they would be there to lean on each other.
Amazing job.
Date: October 11, 2009 06:44 pm Title: It's You and Me, Moving At The Speed Of Light Into Eternity
yay =]
love it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2009 05:54 pm Title: It's You and Me, Moving At The Speed Of Light Into Eternity
oh my god, that was perfect, adorable, beautiful, and most of all so jim and pam. congrats for such an awesome story. and what's more, you're continuing - an author after my own heart! i'm the biggest fan of multiple chapters, so thank you and i am looking forward to reading! i would offer to beta if you want one, but i think you have everything under control, no typos or anything - great job!
p.s., i love your pen name!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am usually so sporadic about posting so I've never used a beta. I would be more than happy to have you take a look for me though before I post the next chapter. I'm writing it as we speak. Niagara got me back in the fan fic mood so I've been writing up a storm today. I have a couple stories to finish so if you're up for the task, let me know!