1 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2018 11:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I love that each of these captures the tone of each season/episode (well, they kept your fourth one from us, but I think the entire fandom would agree with it being canon!) uniquely. The shift of emotions was palpable in such few words. The fifth one had to be my favorite, mostly because that very last line was just perfection. Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2017 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Each one of these vignettes is great! The first 3 so perfectly capture longing and tension, the 4th is pure hotness, then that sweet sweet ending, one of my faves!
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2010 05:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Such a sweet ending to such a delicious story. great job!
10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2009 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story a lot!! After reading this, I realized that Jim has a lot of moments where his hands are in his pockets. I just adore the way you wrote Jim in this story...how he just wants Pam so much. How just a mere touch of Pam would have such an effect on him. I liked #4 for obvious reasons (so hot!) and I LOVED #5 because it melts my heart.
Excellent job!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2009 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
EXCELLENT.
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2009 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1
You are very talented. This was a real treat.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that! It means alot coming from the more established writer's on this site, so thank you so much for the encouragement :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2009 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
your first office fic? No. Can't be. It's too wonderful. Please don't let it be your last. The imagery and characterizations were fantastic. Please share more :)
Author's Response: such kind words! so much encouragement and inspiration :) stand by for further fics!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2009 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
First fic? No way! You write like a pro!. Awesome recap of Jim and Pam's relationship. Very clever story. Hope you'll keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks, that is really lovely to hear! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2009 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job! This is so sweet. I loved it ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for letting me know! :D
Date: October 22, 2009 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This? Was amazing. Just beautiful. Incredible. And all other positive adjectives you can think of.
Jim's hands in pockets thing definitely had the air of desperately trying to hold on to his self control not to touch Pam. You explore that really so touchingly trough different seasons. I love how it moves from one situation to another and he always just has to to touch her.
The angst is really well done here. Classic season 2-3 feel, really.
"As her eyes continue to take up her entire face, her voice unsteady as she rejects everything he's offering, he allows his hand a second of respite, not to touch her but to wipe away the single tear that's feeling like fire across his face." So good. So, so good. My heart aches for him.
And then you make him notice her hair, but not let himself realize she did do it for him... So painful, that whole passage. My heart aches for both of them. Thank goodness they finally found each other.
Which brings us to... The sexy part. Ugh. Holy hell, that was hot. I love the sex life you give them; a little rough, a little adventurous. I can buy it. After all, they're both grown ups with pretty long relationship histories. Not to mention years of bent up sexual frustrations to make up for. So it makes sense that during that first summer they would be going at it like bunnies on Viagra.
I'm favoriting this and will be re-reading often. And I hope to read new stories from you as well!
Author's Response: Holy hell! Thank you so so much for your detailed review, it's really lovely to know what parts have worked well, and what parts are believable. I'm grinning madly at the thought that someone has favourited something I did! I have now written a couple of others but nothing I'm quite as proud of as I am of this particular piece, cuz it's my first one. I hope you'll have a read over if you get the chance! Thanks so much :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was amazingly good!
I loved the way his hands in his pockets symbolized all the restraint he's had to use because of her. It was a nice mix of the early angst (which I sorta miss) and hotness (yay for the conference room table image!) and happiness.
Favorite lines: "He tries to get rid of her imprints on his hands...it doesn't work." and "Holding her so closely, feeling the material of her dress, clutching her gently, he knows he's found peace. Her rejection stings more after feeling her return their kiss." The phrasing is just beautiful there.
" He figures corporate probably wouldn't appreciate him grabbing the receptionist and fucking her over his desk during work hours...after hours however were fair game." - This line made me grin like an idiot...and I loved the last line most of all. It was a beautiful way to wrap everything up.
If you ever felt inclined to write more Office fic, I would love to read it. Thanks for this.
Author's Response: What a lovely and detailed review! So nice to know you liked those parts, I worked pretty hard on them and was so nervous my phrasing would come out badly :) Will definately be writing more and look forward to hearing your opinion on future stuff! Detailed reviews are like extra special fancy crack!
Date: October 21, 2009 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done. Poor horny Jim. *grin* I liked the ending a lot.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love it! The ending line is just so perfect. (And section 4 was HOT - any chance of you writing full-blown smut sometime soon? ;))
Author's Response: Honestly? Yes...yes i may have a few ideas for some smut...but i'm a little nervous as I've never written it before! wish me luck!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
THIS IS YOUR FIRST FAN FIC?????????? it was incredible! amazing job, so realistic, thoughtful, descriptive. i can totally imagine this happening in real (tv) life. great job!
sorry to be breif - it seems like everyone decided to update today. must read and review, read and review, read and review and repeat!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I'm so so glad you enjoyed it I was really really nervous but I can't tell you how much I appreciate the feedback and reviews, they make me wanna write more straight away! They're also a little like crack...
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
That? Was ridiculously good. If that was what you came up with for your first fic, I can't wait to see what you do next now that you have some experience! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Was extremely nervous posting it but people are so lovely and responsive here that I can't wait to do some more!
Date: October 21, 2009 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
wowowowow
SO GOOD. I loved that last line the most!! *sigh*
Author's Response: many wows AND some capitals? i feel so spoilt! thanks so much for reading I'm so happy you liked it!
Date: October 21, 2009 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what an amazing ending. Absolutely beautiful. And that is exactly what we saw in his face in that last frame of them in "Niagara".
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved the expression so I'm glad you think I captured it ok!
Date: October 21, 2009 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was lovely. I love all the scenes that you chose. So glad that they're happy now, but I do enjoy the angst for old time's sake!
Author's Response: Yeah I kinda view the angst of season 3 as some sweet torture...rapidly followed by fluffy bunnyness of later season :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great! The end was wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read it!
Date: October 21, 2009 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first Office fic, vicondinfm! What a great read and such an interesting angle.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it, hooray! Thank you :)
8 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2009 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my. That was...beautiful. Very nicely done. The ending was killer (in a good way).
Author's Response: You are too lovely, thank you so much!