1 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2018 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1
So great! Not crap or OOC. Yes, I agree on those rare moments that Michael gets something right it’s BIG, right? I look forward to rewatching Niagara and thinking of Michael’s commentary when the camera shows him crying. Great work!
Date: December 26, 2009 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Not crap at all, absolutely wonderful. And reversed - normally Jim and Pam are the parents, but now he has the parental pride. :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2009 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Totally, Absolutely Awesome :)
Author's Response: hooray! thank you :) awesome name by the way!
Date: October 28, 2009 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww :) Very sweet! Crap it is not!
Author's Response: thanks so much for taking time to review! tis always nice to hear that something isn't crap, and i was quite worried about this! so thanks so much! :D
10 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2009 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
absolutely NOT crap. that was in fact beautiful, entirely true
AND PERFECT.
that's what it was - ABSOLUTE PERFECTION.
sorry, your short, yet extremely descriptive and accurate sentences rubbed off on me. i loved this.
Author's Response: hooray! thanks so much, what a lovely review! you've made my day :D
Date: October 28, 2009 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
That made my grin from ear to ear, and I don't think it's too much OOC either. I thought it was wonderful, excellent job..I definitely felt emotional reading that.
Author's Response: i'm so glad it got an emotional response - seeing his face whilst they walked back down the aisle did the same for me, so i'm glad the piece caught that! thanks so much for taking the time to review!
Date: October 28, 2009 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Quite a contrast to Seduction I'd say! Most definitely not absolute crap! Not even a tiny bit crap: D This makes me think of Michael's tear-filled eyes and sweet smile in the church. Very nice.
Author's Response: Yeah it's a pretty big change! That is exactly the face I thought of while I wrote this, so I'm glad it brought it to mind for you too! Thanks for yet another lovely review!
8 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2009 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
That's so not crap! It's really good! It's not OOC, I think Michael is sensitive, based on that scene in Halloween when he's handing out candy to little kids, but because he's supposed to be mostly obnoxious, we just don't get to see it at all. Anyway, I really like what you've written here!
Author's Response: Thank so much! I really love Michael's sweeter side when it occasionally comes out, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!