Date: November 11, 2009 08:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Beautiful chapter. I LOVE these. Keep them coming, they are SO SO SO SO cute!! I want this Halpert-Beesly baby right now!
Author's Response: Most anticipated baby ever, for sure. ;) Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2009 07:25 am Title: Chapter 8
This. Keep doing this. I can feel you swinging for the fences in this one, moreso than in anything else you've written (and I have read it all, fwiw). It's clean, concise, and economical. This reads like a story working in concert toward an ultimate goal, that lovely last line you've left us with, and, because you've done so well here, beyond. Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response: Such a kind review, thank you for that. =)
Date: November 11, 2009 06:05 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh my goodness--it's a lovefest! Every chap you post, yanana, makes me so happy :D His mouth gave her everything, gentle and passionate, desperate and thankful. It was the closest he could get to wrapping his mind around it, loving her so intensely in the only thank you he could imagine. How do you say thank you to someone carrying your baby... all of a sudden? *sigh* I love this story. Love it, I tell ya!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad people are enjoying this little thing. =)
Date: November 10, 2009 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
great! i can't wait to read the upcoming chapters!
Date: November 09, 2009 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
awwwwwww....you're officially outnumbered - that's ok. I LOVE that. All this babyfic is making me deliriously happy. Thanks for being a great baby fic peddler. ;-)
Author's Response: Ha I could say the same to you! I might have to hurt you when you wrap up Baby Talk, but we'll worry about that at a later date.
Date: November 09, 2009 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
Freak...ing CUTE!!!!
*THUD*
Author's Response: ::picks you back up, dusts you off:: How many fingers am I holding up? Thanks for the review!
Date: November 09, 2009 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh my god - that was incredibly beautiful - yanana, you've got a gift my friend! great job, and i can't wait for the next chapters!
Author's Response: Ha, thank you! There's definitely way too many more plenty more to come, so stay tuned! =)
Date: November 09, 2009 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
*squee*
it was that level of cuteness =]
Author's Response: Ooh, that's up there on the scale, too! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2009 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love reading this story, yanana. It's just so sweet and cute between Jim and Pam while they're expecting. And in this chapter I love how Jim gets excited and so happy when he finds out that they're having a little girl. I wish they could tell us the sex of the baby in the show, oh well I guess we have to wait til the baby is born. Anyway, I really look for to the next chapters to your story and keep up the great work!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. =) I'm torn between wanting to know the sex of the baby, and also torn between a girl or a boy for them. So, I'm totally going to be happy with whatever the writers have planned, which makes this arc even better. Best season ever. =)
Date: November 09, 2009 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
So sweet and fluffy :)
Author's Response: Guaranteed to make your teeth hurt, that's for sure.
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2009 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
And I thank you for putting a smile on my face at the end of a stressful work day once again. Yanana, this is perfection!
Author's Response: Aw, glad I could help. =) Thanks for the review!
Date: November 09, 2009 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yanana, you are a wonder, a bottomless well of Halpert happiness :D Man, would I love to see that happen. I know it won't, but it's so great to even imagine it.
Author's Response: Thanks! =) Yes, we won't get to see anything like this but I can't wait until we see a first glimpse of Jim as a dad! Ugh, be still my 'shipper heart.
Date: November 09, 2009 09:22 am Title: Chapter 6
So sweet and tender, yanana, this in particular: He couldn't seem to wrap his emotions around himself rationally, always smiling too big and broad, and it melted her heart. Melts my heart, too :)
Author's Response: Ugh, we better get some cuteness on the show from Jim! =)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2009 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
oh my god, that was so beautiful, jim is incredible! i want a jim even more now. darn. but still, this was the best chapter yet by far. every line i read make me love this chapter even more - great job! the dialogue was really realistic, too. i can't wait to read more, are you going to go back to earlier days in the pregnancy or have a delivery and post-birth chapters??? just curious, i'm a little kid at heart, i hate waiting to figure out what my presents will be. reminds me, i really need to get back to co-writing my x-mas fic... it's going to me awesome. but back to you, this was amazing!
Author's Response: thanks for both of your reviews! =) i'm glad you're enjoying it. i don't know if i'll do delivery or post-birth stories yet for this one. i've already done narrative so i don't know if i could do another delivery story and make it different enough. but we'll see. as for now, it's just going to be during the pregnancy days, and i'll continue to go back and forth through the first, second, and third trimesters. the next one i'm posting is going to be the second or third trimester, i can't remember which. thanks again. =)
Date: November 08, 2009 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
okay, did i already review on this one yet??? if not, then i love jim so much in this chapter. he's so absolutely lovable. great job - just the way to end my now happy yet previously homework-filled-to-the-brim life! finally time to unwind.... and read another chapter....
Date: November 08, 2009 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ahhh so brilliant, seriously each chapter is truly amazing. I love this story!!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying. =)
Date: November 08, 2009 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
=] yay fluff
Author's Response: yay fluff indeed!
Date: November 08, 2009 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is so sweet, yanana! A positively lovely break from the angst. So many perfect little details. Make her get out ... Magic Eight Ball ... Actual size baby right here ... Suddenly bringing a baby into the world for him ... I love all these little details. And you've never had a baby, have you?
Author's Response: Thank you. =) Definitely needed a break from the angst with this no-brainer fluff. And, nope, no baby for me yet. It's very likely, with the lack of young children in my family, that the closest I'll be to an infant is the one on my television screen the night Jim and Pam's is born. ;)
Date: November 06, 2009 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
this my favorite chapter so far. just so them. so cute =]
Author's Response: thanks. =)
Date: November 05, 2009 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
Goodness, each chapter is better than the last. Just everything Jim and Pam are here, sweet and sexy and hilarious. You've got a real knack for meshing all of those into just the right recipe. Yay, you!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks lovefool. :)
Date: November 05, 2009 07:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Guh. I love this. They love each other...so much. They love the baby already. It's glorious. What more can I say?! Oh, yeah--you've made noodles sexy : D
Author's Response: Ugh, just hearing you say "they love the baby already" makes me aaache for all of season six to get here even though I want to just savor it Thanks for the review, as always! =)
Date: November 05, 2009 06:44 am Title: Chapter 5
This may very well be the most adorable rendition of Jim Halpert that I've ever read here.
Author's Response: It's a disorder. It's getting to be so out of character, the degree of adorable I want Jim Halpert to be! Thanks for the review.
Date: November 04, 2009 06:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Let's make a pact: you keep writing, and I'll keep reading. Ok? I'm still thoroughly enjoying these little gems.
Author's Response: sounds good, nanreg! thanks for the review! =)
Date: November 03, 2009 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
::sigh:: Oh man this is ART. You ride the exact right line here between sweet and snark. JUST RIGHT. This is perfect dialogue.
Author's Response: ha, you guys are the best for writing such nice reviews for these stupid little vignettes/chapters/drabbles, whatever they are. thank you for reading! =)