Date: October 26, 2022 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 20
I, as Anna myself, approve of your choice😊 (even though I love her canon name).
Date: October 25, 2022 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter!
1 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2022 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ooh, I'm totally feeling the Christmas spirit even during October. Nicely done!
1 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2018 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sigh... I really love this chapter
10 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2010 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 24
the image of jim holding naked little cece is just too cute. i know, that sounds creepy. but come on.
Date: March 07, 2010 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 24
As wonderful as ever, Kate. I still can't believe these kids finally had their baby!
Date: March 06, 2010 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 24
I'm so sorry I didn't review this one much. It was such a great story and a wonderful way to get us through the waiting for Cecelia to make her appearance.
Date: March 06, 2010 07:59 am Title: Chapter 24
Great story. I like how you ended with our actually MEETING little Cecelia Marie and having Jim and Pam expecting the next child. This was a really sweet story all around!
Date: March 06, 2010 06:25 am Title: Chapter 24
The part about the first child being perfect and them wondering how the second could ever been that magnificent really rang true. I remember wondering that before my second was born. But then, of course, the second one is just as perfect as the first. Sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2010 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 24
So I'm a hardcore fan of this story, and that chapter was an incredible way to end it. You're an incredibly talent author, and this is definitely in my top 3 stories ever.
But quick side note, don't hate me, but I literally posted a fic and then came to read this chapter and their is something in this chapter that is in my fic too, and it's going to look like I copied you, but I promise you that I didn't! Just want to clear that up, and also it's my first fic ever so I'm really self-conscious about it haha.
Date: March 05, 2010 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 24
I love it! This one was great! I love how you incorporated the "Cecelia" song there. So sad to see this one end. It was good while it lasted. I think I found myself re-reading the previous chapters all the time. I'm a big fan of "Two"... don't give up on that missy! luvs...
10 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2010 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 24
HAHAHAHA. Aww, that last little bit was adorable. No. What? They grow up so fast! Lol. I just loved this chapter. It took me a minute or two to realize that the non italics part was the second trimester of the second baby, but otherwise, I thought this whole thing was perfect. I just am so excited about little Cece! So cute. I'll be quiet now...
10 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2010 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 24
Lovely ending to a lovely story *sobs*
10 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2010 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 24
Awww. I loved this chapter! Perfect ending.
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2010 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 23
So so so beautiful. Seriously this is one of the best stories I have read. I no want them to end :(
Take us through the baby's first year, mmkay? Do it. Screw school or a social life!! :)
Date: March 04, 2010 06:44 am Title: Chapter 23
He woke up to her, peaceful as her prior version, swept across one side of the bed, with her hair across the pillow and her hand against his heart. That, my friend, is simply beautiful.
And this: He wanted to whisper the same things to her, put the words on her skin like a brand. I'm not leaving, so you can't go anywhere, either.
I liked the mood you created here, yanana. There were irrational fears that we all experience, but, also, such passion. Excellent.
Date: March 04, 2010 04:56 am Title: Chapter 23
I really liked the "undone" noodles as a lead in to Pam's doubts. Very organic and real. And I can defnitely see Jim being very upset at Pam ever doubting him. Sweet.
Date: March 03, 2010 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 22
oh man, so many intimate sexy moments here, but the moment I love the most has to be this:
Even if it was freaking him out a little, this baby fluttering against his palm and keeping him awake as Pam slept, he'd never lied to her. Making a baby was the most romantic thing he'd ever done in his entire life, and she was carrying it around for nine months, as they waited for their little girl to make an appearance in their lives
LOVE THAT.
Date: March 03, 2010 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 22
I really liked Pam's ambivalence here - her confusion about what she wants, how she feels. Very ninth monthish. Also, Jim Halpert is a veritable saint in this one, don't you think? *grin*
Date: March 03, 2010 10:15 am Title: Chapter 22
:) another beautiful chapter--will you be finishing this tomorrow?
Date: March 03, 2010 06:19 am Title: Chapter 22
Making a baby was the most romantic thing he'd ever done in his entire life That is just so pretty. As is this: He swept the curls away from her neck to plant a kiss there. And before he could close his eyes, he stared thoughtfully at the handful of delicate golden curls against his palm. Imagined them lighter, smaller, softer. Sneaking a look over her shoulder to her pursed lips, pale cheeks, long eyelashes.
Imagined her duplicate, maybe.
I'll be sorry when this is done, yanana, but I'm hoping you'll be inspired to write some baby fic shortly. So greedy :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2010 12:36 am Title: Chapter 22
Hmm tomorrow's episode? I think Kelly gets excited over something. Angela brings in one of her cats. Kevin discovers he has an M&M allergy... eeeeeeeee :)
That was AMAZING as usual. I can so see Pam going through this. Not believing that Jim would find her sexy when she's huge. So perfectly in character. I'm going to miss this when it's over!!!
Date: February 24, 2010 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 21
I don't know what just happened but I found myself laughing uncontrollably at all the Angela stuff. It just seemed like you had set up such a beautiful, calm moment and then Angela pipes in with the "out of wedlock" comment - brilliant timing there. So, so funny. Then Michael's new nickname for her...hilarious.
10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2010 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 21
Very cute, love the Friends reference and all the famos Anna's lmao!!!
Date: February 24, 2010 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 21
That ending section of them on the roof, that was outstanding. I don't know if I'm getting all sentimental about next week, but seriously, this Remembered a pretty receptionist and a dream he had.
Pam chuckled quietly. "Kicking."
He couldn't feel it, but he knew it was there.
He lowered his head and smirked.
Déjà vu, he guessed. was just lovely and perfect and wonderful.