9 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2016 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha. This was great. Totally IC, where I could just hear this in Pam and Michael's voices. :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 05, 2006 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is awesome. I LOVE Michael and I loved that you had Pam go talk to him about Ed. You wrote Michael really well!! I loved that you added the thing about the statue, that was the best when he and Dwight had that convo, lmao.
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was great. We need more Michael fanfic. I love him. Thanks for reminding us he's really not a bad guy. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww! This was so good! I loved Pam in this episode, she was totally awesome and their convo in this fic fits in perfectly with that episode. Great job!
9 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2006 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
"This is why... you and I... simpatable." - similar + compatable = simpatable. Oh, Michael.
"Yeah, you know... we talk sometimes... that one time." - reminds me of "...we hang out a ton...mostly at work."
You're good at writing Michael. I love that Pam went to him for additional comforting.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed this. You just know Pam would do something like this for Michael. And I loved their conversation about Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really really loved this story. You were able to convey Michael and Pam's voices so well. This was sweet and funny and a little bit heartbreaking. And I love the play on words with the title. Great job!
8 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so sweet! I love that Pam is this great a person, making the effort to cheer up the guy who 90% of the time is a total insensitive idiot.
And I love your Michael-isms: "simpatable", And "He said he was so heartbroken he had to leave, and he was really upset about it because Josh is an ass" cracked me up! So good.
This part: "he just wanted me to pick him right then and I couldn't" kind of makes me mad (not at you) because it just emphasizes how much better that scene could have gone with better communication - I mean, I know from Pam's POV it must have seemed like this huge pressure on her to choose right then, but he never said it was a now-or-never thing, and I really think if she'd said "Could you just give me time to absorb and think about this?" Jim would have let her. "Yes, I'm still going to marry him" doesn't give much room for negotiation. Sorry - little rant that was only tangentially related to what you had in your story, which I loved.
And I love the "eyes light up" thing - as the title and where it was used in the story. It's cute. :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so, so sweet. I can totally see this scenario playing out, and you have both of their voices just right. Lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet. I love this.
9 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2006 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that's so sweet! Pam totally does like Michael, even when he annoys her--otherwise, why would she have done the whole funeral?
8 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Michael is such a heartbreaking character, and you've really captured that here. Yours is one of the only fics where this idea...
he just wanted me to pick him right then
...is so well expressed that I said, "Yeah, from Pam's point of view that was unfair." Really nice job.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was sweet. Pam was so good to Michael in this episode. Great continuation of that:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a wonderful Michael/Pam story. I love Michael so much, and you captured him very well.
"No, really... if I were to die... would you put a statue of me in the office? I think it would make you feel better. To see me everyday.""Yes, Michael... we'll put a statue of you in the office."
"Can you make it so the eyes light up?"
Priceless!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so sweet. And this part,
"Really? He said he was so heartbroken he had to leave, and he was really upset about it because Josh is an ass."
completely cracked me up. The truth according to Michael Scott.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so funny, but touching too...hey, just like the show. You really nailed Michael, and that ain't easy. Loved his version of what Jim told him at the convention. Just great.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, I really liked this! I love Michael, I think just as much as I like Jim and Pam, and I just love it when people write stories about him. I could definitely see Michael saying this:
"You just don't think about that kind of stuff, you know? One day you are living life, driving with the top down, and the next thing you know, your top's gone. Your head's just lying on the road."
LOL. Agent Michael Scarn, you so funny. Word.
Author's Response: Thank you :) This makes me feel good because I was worried about capturing Michael.
Date: October 14, 2006 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Really? He said he was so heartbroken he had to leave, and he was really upset about it because Josh is an ass."
In one word - BWAH! Great line and great story!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
You totally captured Michael Scott.
This?
"Yeah, you know... we talk sometimes... that one time."
Was dead on!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was my favorite line. I was worried about trying to make somber Michael but still Michael. Thank you :)