Date: February 19, 2010 11:51 pm Title: Welcome
ohh i can totally imagine this on march 4th ..well without jd.
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2010 09:20 am Title: Welcome
SO cuteeeeeeee!!!
Date: February 18, 2010 09:46 pm Title: Welcome
Aww, this is so cute! Have I read this chapter already, it seems so familiar? Did you have to repost it? Anyways, this was great! Nice job!
Author's Response: i had to re-post it. i tried to make some edits to it, but when i hit "preview", it deleted it :o(
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2010 06:55 pm Title: Welcome
Pam looked up at Jim and smiled.
“Thank you,” she whispered.
“For what?”
She looked down at Mollie, and then back up to Jim.
“Everything.” Just the perfect line right there, everything really does sum it up.
I loved the peek into how Mollie made her way into the world, and I love how much they adore their kids, how great Jim's mom is in this, and just everything about it. Very well done, great addition to "It's too soon" which is one of my favorite stories.
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 01:41 pm Title: Welcome
I LOVE the name Mollie. I hope you continue this. I want to get to know Mollie, and see how J.D copes being a big brother, and how Jim and Pam cope with a little girl. Love it :)
Author's Response: i sort of did, with my story "we just can't escape the madness"
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 01:12 pm Title: They call it "labor" for a reason
This killed me.
“I’ve got you,” Jim said, grabbing her hand. “I’ve got you…” < I could see that so perfectly and it was just so cute and perfect and guh!!!
This is so real and realistic and - can I say perfect one more time?
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 12:54 pm Title: Welcome
awww, that was so sweet - great job, and good idea to break the last chapter where you did! this was so well written - J.D. was adorable and so gentle with his kiss!
Date: December 21, 2009 09:14 am Title: Welcome
Wow, harrowing story! Kinda makes me glad to be a guy... Good work!