Date: February 21, 2010 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just saw this on the "Story of the Moment" and I'm so glad!
I have never been so happy to read this line: It was just a dream. You wrote Jim's panicked feeling so well, the way I think he would feel if suddenly everything was not the way it should be: Him living happily with Pam and expecting their first child.
Thanks for sharing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 25, 2009 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! My heart just ached for Jim!
10 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2009 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was great. Great story and well written.
Date: December 24, 2009 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you decided to post this. I was just thinking about it the other day. And I'm so glad Jim is back where he belongs - with Pam and babyHalpert.
Date: December 23, 2009 07:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I very much enjoyed this. I'm usually not much for "flashbacks/dreams" but this was exceptionally well done and I was right back with desperate Jim and I got that tight, twisting feeling back in my stomach, and then I felt a huge sense of relief when he found himself back in the present. Awesome.
Author's Response: It's funny, 'cause I'm not into the dreamy idea, but when this idea came to me it was hard to not write it. For some strange reason, I really enjoyed writing a Jim who longs for Pam. I'm really glad that that the emotion that I wanted to convey in my head was on paper as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
8 [Report This]Date: December 22, 2009 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this. Also though, it'd be interesting if this was a fantasy kind of fic and ended with Jim being stuck in this world, what would he do?
Author's Response: That's definitely an interesting idea to pursue. But, I wanted to do a oneshot thing. I think, amid all the baby-fluff fics, it would get lost, you know what I mean? I really enjoy writing Jim longing for Pam, so that idea would be great. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: December 21, 2009 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg i really love it, theres a lot of fic's about nigthmares but i really like the way you describe this one, so real. And i enjoy A LOT jealous jim, u dont see that really othen.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed this one. When the idea came to me, I wasn't sure about it, but I gave it a shot and I really enjoyed writing all angst and longing, also jealous Jim. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow, that was really interesting at the beginning for lack of a better word! i liked it a lot, and this was a very unused topic, congrats for coming up with something new! great job, this was very well written!
Author's Response: This was definitely a different topic. I don't know why, but I'm always leaning towards "different" ideas. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: December 21, 2009 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked your tone here. You conveyed his tension and anguish very well. It had to be torture for present Jim just like it had been for past Jim. Nicely done!
Author's Response: I'm so happy I was able to put the emotions I wanted to convey on paper. It was hard writing the angsty stuff, but the fluff and his longing for her came easily. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1
So very cool! I really felt anxious reading this, but in a good, I need to read this as fast as possible to see how it ends, kind of way. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I wasn't sure about this one. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!