Date: October 15, 2006 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Jim. Poor sweet Jim. If only she would just plant one on him like that...
Author's Response: Really! Enough is enough!! Thanks for the review. I appreciate it:)
Date: October 15, 2006 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor sweet Jim. Wanting to go back to sleep so he can have another dream like that. Sigh....
Author's Response:
I think he needs a hug, don't you? Thanks so much for reviewing:)
Date: October 15, 2006 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, poor Jim. *hugs Jim* This was lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you so much:) Yes, Jim does need a hug, doesn't he?
Date: October 15, 2006 05:06 am Title: Chapter 1
This made me want to hug Jim, and buy him a soda, and...other stuff. The dream sequence was hot and sad and sounded just right for J&P's voices. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! It's always a challenge(for me)when it comes to their voices. Appreciate the support:)
Date: October 15, 2006 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww...poor lonely Jim. Very hot action.
Author's Response: Thank you:) I just can't keep these two away from each other.
Date: October 14, 2006 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so good, because you really conveyed the feeling of a dream well-- mismatched and a bit strange and with some familiar elements.
And-- "Please don't marry him." For some reason, the perfect thing for him to say.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I really appreciate it:)
Date: October 14, 2006 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
“I thought you were buying me my own soda.”
That right there? Laugh-out-loud funny.
You have that dream quality working well here. I love that what he wants doesn't turn out to be sexual, but for Pam not to marry Roy. Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Jim is always trying to keep it light and funny....until he can't any longer. Sadly, I say this like I know him.
Date: October 14, 2006 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this! Now let Jim get some sleep :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, the poor boy needs more sleep:)
Date: October 14, 2006 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gulp.
This was nothing short of awesome. It's so difficult to keep them in character in a moment like this one (because we never see this on the show - or haven't yet, anyway....), and you just captured them so perfectly here.
Sigh. Just wonderful, absolutely perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. That is so nice to hear. And thank YOU for writing such amazing work as quickly as you do. It is very much appreciated.