9 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2010 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
So beautifully sad. I did feel some comfort in Jim's "Don't" so maybe things aren't as dire as they seem. (I'm always looking for a happy ending.) Good job with a sad, serious subject.
Date: January 31, 2010 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ouch. Such a sad scenario. Good thing is is just fanfic because otherwise, I'd have to throw garbage at you ;o)
Author's Response: Haha, good thing this is fanfiction because I would have to pull out my hair. ;) Thanks for the review, bkwrm.
Date: January 30, 2010 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Would be interesting to see you continue this, was sad to see you marked it as complete aw.
By Max, did you mean Alex? I was like wtf is Max lol.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I don't think I can continue this. I'm more of a one shot-er. Yeah, sorry, I totally blanked on his name when writing it. I was hoping I was close... clearly I was not. :) Thanks a lot, Hannah_Halpert!
Date: January 30, 2010 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg!! i have to read the next part. it breaks my heart just thinking about jim crying ='(
Author's Response: Sorry dmbd, there's only one part. Mine too. :( I'm sorry for breaking your heart, but its good though right - means the stories doing what its suppose to. Thanks for the review, dmbd.
Date: January 30, 2010 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sad :( well written, but sad. Liked it, though :)
Author's Response: Thanks Andastainonmyshirt. I'm glad you liked it though. :) I apologize for the sadness but it was needed in the story.
9 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2010 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
As much as I don't want to say I liked this, I kind of actually did. Why? Because this had such a great perspective and tone. I couldn't stand the topic, JAM forever, baby! But this actually worked the way you wrote it. One thing though, I did find a few typos, left out apostrophe's in can't, etc. Take a quick look through and edit once more, otherwise this is really good! I would give you a ten, but I just can't because of the subject. Sorry!
Author's Response: Sorry about the typos, I'll make sure to fix them right now. And I'm glad you think I made the story work although the subject makes my heartbreak too. :( Thanks so much, pamelamorganhalpert. JAM forever!!
Date: January 30, 2010 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Guh. So sad. I don't usually go for sad stories, but I think I read some of your work in the past and liked it. Good for you, following your idea even despite the threat of garbage ; ) One little thing that kinda took me out of the story: Pam's art school friend's name was Alex. Otherwise, nice job.
Author's Response: Darn it, I knew I had Alex's name wrong but I forgot to check. I'm glad you took the time out to read this even though you don't go for the sad JAM. :) Thanks for the kind words, NanReg.