Date: September 23, 2020 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is beautiful, takes me back to the birth of my own daughters, and my husband’s reaction.
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2010 11:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Yanana, this is enchanting--perfect NewDaddy!Jim.
I feel like I'm late to the party. I mean, totally without meaning to be...I don't feel like I know her yet. I feel like I just met her. And I did. But Pam is old friends with this girl. Love that. Another winner, lady.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! I hope we get to see more of Jim as a new dad soon. =)
Date: March 08, 2010 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This was just wonderful!
Author's Response: thank you very much. =)
10 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2010 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok this story? Made me cry. In a good way. I haven't read Jim/Pam in a while but this ep lured me back and this fic was beautiful.
She's the only perfect thing about me, this little girl.
I was a little teary but this was the line that really got me. Gorgeous.
She doesn't answer. Her wit will come, I'm sure.
This is just so Jim.
Lovely :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for such a nice review. =) So happy you liked it!
Date: March 05, 2010 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww. So adorable. I can't wait to see more of Jim, Pam, and Cecelia.
Author's Response: Me, too! I hope she makes an appearance now and then.
Date: March 05, 2010 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job! I really enjoy Daddy Jim. You did him justice.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: March 04, 2010 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Yanana. This is just...perfect. I love so much of this. One of my favorites is him saying "the one next to me is the one I chose and the one across the room is the one I made."
Well, how's about THAT for an epiphany. Gosh this is just perfect. What a great capper on a fantastic evening.
Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks babe, I love hearing from you. I have to say I was pretty excited to hear from you post-episode, knowing you were anticipating this baby as much as I was (too much). And looking forward to your post-ep contribution of course, which looks so promising. Glad you liked my little mess here. =) Happy rewatching!
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2010 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so beautifully written. Fabulous job, yanana, as always. And the fact that she's named Cecelia? Awesome! I'm so glad they picked a name that's more interesting than Jim and Pam. But I love Marie, and as soon as I first heard Jim say that, I thought that they must have been reading the stories here at MTT, as so many seem to have Marie in them!
Anyways, I'll go to sleep now, but that was incredible, did you have that prewritten and then just add in the name? Or was this just a spur of the moment? Great job!
Author's Response: Oh, no this was written immediately post-episode. As if it's a natural fan response, haha. I don't think the lyrics to "Cecilia" by Simon and Garfunkel would have fitted with any other name, you know? ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: March 04, 2010 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow you are a really fast writer..!!!
and this was just so sweet and perfect.
hey how a about a fic where you use the frase
"Hey, remember when you had your boob in another men's hands?"
that would be sooo fun!!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2010 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was too freaking adorable for words. You should be arrested for writing such beautiful stories.... I hope we see LOTS more of them to come. I really am dying over here.
Author's Response: Thank you, Sally! It's been almost three days and I'm still watching the episode. It really was such a treat to us, wasn't it?
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2010 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, now THAT was fast! (TWSS)
Still haven't gotten over the cuteness of this episode and you, my friend are NOT helping! Bah, as if I could ever get over it anyway. SO ADORABLE! This was very sweet, exactly what I needed after watching new Daddy Jim.
But nice to see he still has his sense of humour: "Hey, remember when you had your boob in another kid's mouth?"
Oh Jim, don't ever change. I love this fake family so damn much :D
Author's Response: If you are trying to get over the cuteness of the Delivery, then I'm afraid we can never be friends. ;) I'm way too in love with this fake family to give a damn. Thanks for reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2010 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really cute!! Jim's point of view of being parent for the first time and going through the moments when he saw Cecilia. I love it! I hope you write some more of these stories about them!!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure I will, haha. Thanks for reading.
Date: March 04, 2010 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Super cute!! Nicely done and it helped me relive the awesomeness of the episode.
*Found one typo, though: "Oh, and they're hers for sure. No, we already... did the mix-up thing. This one's hours."
It should be "ours", not "hours". =)
Author's Response: Thank you! Corrected that typo. Thanks for reading.