Date: April 19, 2010 07:57 pm Title: How it all started
This is really good, very very accurate and in character. And I loved Jim's prank on Dwight, really really funny!
Author's Response: Thanks you for the great review Deedldee! It always nice to get a review from one of your favorite writers. I'm glad you thought the pranks were funny, most of the credit there must go to my brother, who has a very Jim-like mind at times. Whether that's good or bad I'm not really sure :)
Date: April 19, 2010 06:19 pm Title: How it all started
Hehe, nice insight into the cookie metaphor :) I don't think you need worry about them being out of character at all - I could hear their voices in my head through the dialouge :) and they definately do have human emotions underneath ;) I'm even sort of craving these too a bit lately what with the happenings on the show - I hadn't realised quite how much I actually kind of want them to be together. lol.
Author's Response: Thanks you for reviewing! I glad you thought they were in character, I was afraid that someone might think Angela admiring Dwight, or Dwight apologizing to Angela might seem out of place. But I really do think they bring out the best in each other. Now that JAM seems like they'll be happy for a while, I hope the writers will remember poor Dwangala.
Date: April 19, 2010 06:15 pm Title: How it all started
I just loved that! Monkey and D were spot on. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for always taking the time to review, you are a reviwing writers dream!When I read the challange, this scenerio popped into my head. Now I'm starting to think I should be looking into therapy ......