Date: May 20, 2010 08:08 am Title: Mother's Day
Nice to know that I wasn't the only one thinking of Pam on Mother's Day ; ) Jim's card was particularly adorable. Thanks for this sweet treat, apf12.
Author's Response: That's why I decided to do a fic about Pam's first Mother's day. I thought it would be nice to post the story for you guys to read and imagine what Pam's first Mother's day would be like as the whole family celebrate and spent time together. I'm glad you like the story NanReg! =)
Date: May 16, 2010 09:27 pm Title: Mother's Day
Awww, what a sweet story. And a team effort, too! Sorry I bailed out on this one, I got busy with school stuff, but this turned out amazingly. I love how it started out with your idea and everyone else seemed to have pitched in to make something fabulous. Great job, adampascalfan12, and this is great! I always loved the letter, and I think you've got a great version there.
P.S. I caught two things, in the first italicized flashback you have 'jim walked in without no shirt on' instead of 'jim walked in without a shirt on' or 'without his shirt on' - i think that's what you meant to say. secondly, in the A/N you added a 'n' to the end of deedldee's name.
this turned out great, and i'm sorry i got busy and had to stop, what a sweet fic!
Author's Response: That's okay, I understand that you had to work on school stuff. I was going to post it just in time for Mother's day, but studying for the finals took me off track with the story. But I'm glad that I had you guys to help me to make the story flow more better and recommeded some suggestions. That was great team effort, I enjoyed working with all of you and is happy that the story turned out to be great! So thank you for helping!
P.S. I changed the mistakes, thanks for pointing that out!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2010 06:24 pm Title: Mother's Day
Cecelia resting her little pudgy hand next to Pam's heart as they gazed at each other.
*thud* that killed me (in a good way)
Author's Response: I'm glad it did (in a good way too)! when I did that part, I wanted to described the scene of Pam and Cecelia as mother and daughter well in the story. It gets that particular image in the reader's mind, that is their special time together, just bonding.
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2010 05:08 pm Title: Mother's Day
Very very cute. I like how Jim mentioned the Bring your daughter in to work day, and how Pam reacted around kids.
Thans for this sugary fic :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! =)
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2010 11:23 am Title: Mother's Day
Aw yay you posted it! This is so cute and I love the little additions you made. You're welcome and I look forward to reading more stories
from you!
Author's Response: I'm pretty happy that this is one of my good stories that I ever written and with you pitching in with some suggestions and help. So thank you again, I appreciate it so much!