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Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2010 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Now THAT would be a Season Finale.  And Dwight trying to keep two pregnant women happy would be freaking hilarious!!

Author's Response: Lol.. Thanks! I thought it would be funny, too. It has a lot of laughs potential. Oh well.... maybe next season. Thanks again!

Reviewer: floppyhair Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2010 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Hahha I couldn't envision this actually happening (*imagines thousand of angry interwebbers typing the dreaded 'jumped the shark'*) but I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! Wow, you think so? I can't see this as being a "jump the shark" moment, especially with a peripheral character, but you never know. Glad YOU like it, though!

Author's Response: Thanks! Wow, you think so? I can't see this as being a "jump the shark" moment, especially with a peripheral character, but you never know. Glad YOU like it, though!

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2010 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1

LOL really clever! I'm good without all the baby mamma drama that you have here, but this is really funny!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not a big fan of sudden TV pregnancies (I wasn't even a fan of JAM's sudden parenthood) but the situation with Dwight and Angela would make this interesting to me. Thanks again!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2010 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey, Kevin!  Believe it or not, I was just wondering where you've been...and here you are!  With another gem, no less.  Oh, the horror!  Oh, the humor!  Nice :)

Author's Response: Thanks Nan! I've been busy with a lot of other stuff so I hadn't thought of anything to write in awhile. Maybe this will spark me.. thanks again!

Reviewer: ELiXiR2722 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2010 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha now THAT'S funny! that would have been an awesome finale!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god! That was hilarious and incredibly amazing. I love this so much - keep going!!! And I love the style, it's so nice to see a script format every once in a while, really refreshing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I haven't written a full script or one of my Cold Openings in awhile so it was kinda fun to do a new one. Maybe it's time to get writing again...

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Now that screams Office 'finale'. No pun intended.

As always, a very creative and entertaining scene.

Author's Response: Lol.. thanks!

Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha! NO. Just, no. I'll take our underwhelming finale over this kind of soap opera. :)

You made me laugh, though, so. Well done.

Author's Response: Lol... aw, c'mon, Callisto! Lol...

Reviewer: Sarah42 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, I wish you'd continue this! It's hilarious!

Author's Response: Thanks! But I think I should leave well enough alone.. lol.. if anyone else wants to run with, please, have at it!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

I still enjoy this show a lot, but it would be so much better if they would just hire you to write for them. This is exactly what the finale needed.

Author's Response: Awwww, thanks Jazzy! You're always good to me!

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG! That would've been amazing! Pam would be like an aunt to Dwight's baby? Awesome!!!! lol


Author's Response: Yikes. Hadn't considered that! Lol... thanks!

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

best idea ever!!! i like the ep too but it didnt felt like a finale to me =/

hahhaha lol i had forgotten about jim and pam been there!!!!...and THIS is a finale

Author's Response: Lol... thanks!

Reviewer: Newtruefan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes, I missed Isabel too but I never considered that she and Angela would be fighting over Dwight's sperm. Ugggh, I just got the hairy shivers.

BTW, Jim and Pam together in the last few episodes have been golden.

Author's Response: Thanks! I just wish there were more Jim and Pam. They seemed almost like bystanders in that finale. That little scene in the stairwell WAS cute though... thanks again!

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