Date: July 17, 2010 02:17 am Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
uh, so utterly in love with this. i'm hoping that linebacker was roy perhaps? annnnyway this rocks and i officially miss being a student and collegiate jim and pam are adorable! keep it up ivy.
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2010 03:24 pm Title: What's a little epitaxis among friends?
can i just say that i am truly enjoying this story. i've always loved the where jim and pam meet in different circumstances, especially when they're younger. and you're also doing a great job in making me miss my college days. dreadfully miss them ;)
Author's Response: I miss mine as well. Or more, I miss my friends. Now we're all separated to different corners of the country and rarely see one another. I miss the comfort there.
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2010 02:01 pm Title: What's a little epitaxis among friends?
I'm not a big fan of the college stories, but I am loving your story so far! Great work, can't wait to read more :).
Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a chance! Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: July 15, 2010 06:34 am Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
I've decided that I don'tneed to work today, so you can just keep posting chaps. Ok, ivy? ;) Such fun.
Author's Response: If only I'd been in the same boat, Nan. This was one of my most useless days EVER at the office. I literally cannot get my job done when people don't respond. It would have been so much more productive to stay home and write stories.
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2010 11:52 pm Title: What's a little epitaxis among friends?
so is pam still engaged to roy? i'm kinda thinking jim would've noticed, considering he's been pretty attentive towards her. so i'm going to go with they were together and then broke up. because if they were still together i think pam would be acting pretty differently about kissing jim and participating in three man.
anyways, like FlonkertonChamp said, nice job with jim's idea of a distraction and stop it with the cliff hangers already! so frustrating! no, i secretly love them :)
keep going and let's get jim and pam making out in the closet or something else michael would say.
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2010 11:08 pm Title: What's a little epitaxis among friends?
ooh, cliffhanger! (ish.) i'm loving this so much. and really loving the quick updates! i loved the little jim/pam moment in the kitchen, very sweet. i loved the line "it's a very cute face."
and jim telling michael to think about boobs. ha!
keep this going!
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2010 08:15 am Title: For I have sinned
Oh no! Now Pam thinks he's a man-whore. Poor Pam! And very good thing Angela was sent out of the room. Karen's line was pretty accurate - she would have burst into flames! I really love this, and sort of wish I was still young and in college so I could play fun games again. More of this now, please? :)
Author's Response: Yeah, bringing back all these memories is definitely making me miss my college days as well.
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2010 01:31 pm Title: For I have sinned
omg the image of dwight doing the shirtless tango with a lamp made me laugh so hard.
and karen's little "trick" with michael... i'm horrified to say that i'm intrigued.
Author's Response: For the record, that little trick works if you do it right. One person thought he could withstand its powers. He ended up falling flat on his back. And yes, the evidence of success was quite apparent.
Date: July 13, 2010 06:00 am Title: For I have sinned
Holy guacamole! I think you broke my brain, ivy. I am so enjoying this and am appreciative of the quick updates!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2010 09:03 pm Title: For I have sinned
Wow, Jim. And thank you for sending Angela to the powder room. Poor Pam, now she must feel so awful. Great chapter as always, and please pretty please keep going. You have all these characters down so well, it's just hard to stop!
Date: July 12, 2010 12:45 am Title: The sausage king of Scranton, Pa.
omg this is so FUn to read!!! i love it...im in college i should be doing stuff like that! to bad mine isnt the kind fo college where you live there and have roomates =(
Author's Response: Yeah, the whole living amongst your peers thing is definitely a benefit of the college experience. But you can still have fun experiences like this, with the right people. A roomful of Angela would not be the way to go.
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2010 12:05 am Title: The sausage king of Scranton, Pa.
Wow. Just wow. This story is just so fun to read! I love all of your secret glances you have between Jim and Pam. Very nice. And the iron and pitcher? I think I snorted laughing so hard... lol. And you made up the hand kiss? (Yes, I realize I'm repeating everything you said in your AN, but seriously, you bring up the best points of the story! They're so funny!) The hand kiss was just perfect, I really respect Jim's... er.... respect for Angela's sanity. Very nice. Anyways, keep this up, and I want to see these two together at some point, take your time though - this is so fun! (this may just be the stupidest review I have ever written - but I don't really care at this point, :) I just want to convey that I love this story!)
Author's Response: Yeah, we had one girl who would only closed-mouth kiss and everyone respected that, so I wanted to take it further with Angela and it seemed like Jim would find a way to respect her limits while still playing the game, that Pam would be kind of smitten by Jim's kindness, and that Karen would be savvy enough to kind of orchestrate it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It's making me miss being young!
Date: July 11, 2010 08:45 pm Title: The sausage king of Scranton, Pa.
I'm really loving this story! You delineate the character's personalities and traits to a different environment so well. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying that. It's always a challenge to put these characters in such a different environment, so I'm glad you're finding the efforts successful.
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2010 07:37 pm Title: The sausage king of Scranton, Pa.
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more. Again, the characterizations are wonderful. I love how quickly Jim is falling for Pam and how cool Karen is in this story. Oh, and Michael being so infantile - so so funny!
Author's Response: Like I said, I really did like Karen, just not with Jim. When she's a Jim/Pam obstacle, she has to be bad, somehow. But I really like the idea of a cool, pro-Jam Karen.
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2010 07:15 pm Title: The sausage king of Scranton, Pa.
Eeeeeeeeeee this chapter was so good. I can't wait to see what happens between Jim and Pam. And the knuckle kiss? That melted me.
Author's Response: I can see Jim having a bit of a soft spot for Angela, being able to see through her tough exterior.
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2010 06:59 pm Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
Okay, love it already. I thought the description of Pam as a peacekeeper. And a troublemaker was spot on.
Really in character. Can't wait for the next part!
Date: July 11, 2010 10:19 am Title: The sausage king of Scranton, Pa.
So much to smile about in this chap, ivy. First off, I loved the hand kiss--very sweet. Ferris Bueller shout outs? Of course I'm going to love that. And, finally, 13"? Yet to be revealed? Such a tease ;) Needless to say, I'm looking forward to more (TWSS) :D
Author's Response: Are you focusing on the word "revealed?" Is it because you want to see Jim's penis? Is that all that's important to you, Nan? ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2010 07:02 pm Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
I have to give you major kudos here. You've got all the characters voices down pat. I really enjoy that Pam's jealous of Karen kissing Jim, and that Jim wants to know if she is jealous. Really cute concept, looking forward to the rest!
10 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2010 03:03 am Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
ooohh, i'm intrigued. can't wait for more! (and, um... the "MA" chapters... *cough*)
i liked karen too, just not as jim's girlfriend.
Date: July 08, 2010 09:31 am Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
This is fun, ivy. I think you did a good job at transplanting the characters to another scenario. Their voices ring true to me.
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2010 11:46 pm Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
I'm really loving the start of this, andtheivy! Very well written and the plot is so original! Plus, nice use of wunderkind - I cracked up there. I have to agree with you about Karen, she seemed like a nice person (how could a character played by Rashida Jones not be?) - but she and Jim didn't do well together. Anyways, I'm looking forwards to the continuation of this and let's get started with that art therapy conversation! Isn't that where (in this situation) people would go see Pam and she would have them do a type of art and they would talk about what motivated them to incorporate this and that in their artwork? Like Jim, I'm going to look that up, too...
9 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2010 09:11 pm Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
YES! I love College!Office so much, andtheivy. It's really just so awesome to imagine our Dunder Mifflin-ites playing Three Man because now I wish I was 19 again. I love you for starting this! Majorly excited for more, especcially how you'll use Roy. Cheating boyfriend at neighboring university? High School Sweetheart seeking revenge? The possibilites are endless!
Anyway I can't wait to see where you go with this because I love your stories and this one is sure so be awesome. Great start!
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2010 08:28 pm Title: Fresh meat and feather boas
Oh, nice. I like it when Jim and Pam are sent to college with other DMers. I agree with you, I like Karen as a friend to Jim and Pam. Look forward to more!
I love how well you've done young collegiate Dwight!