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I absolutely love this - not that I was dying for more Jim and Pam angst or anything, but it's nice to see someone acknowledge that as a couple that was pretty obsessed with each other and had a kid they clearly didn't plan for, there would be even amongst all that happiness a certain level of recognition that hey, we wouldn't have hated it if that period of our relationship wasn't over.

This is excellent. Just so, so sweet and sexy.  Thanks for this.

Thank you for this.  A perfect chance for them to reconnect, just the two of them. That's the key to a good marriage, remembering who you were at the beginning, and appreciating how far you've come despite life's changes.  

Great job and very sensual imagery.

P.S.  Upon re-read, if forced at gunpoint to choose:  You ache and ache when he kisses you in the dim lamplight of a strange bedroom, with his face serious and his mouth relentless. Love. that.

See now, I love second-person pov stories (they can have an almost strange intimacy and sense of immediacy.) Problem is, they're SO hard to do well - the voice has to be just right, in all its nuance, or it falls apart. And this one sings Pam.

I could smell the musty wood cabin, see her beautiful tanned husband thru her eyes and feel her 'missing' him... also this phrasing is perfect: I love that girl. Simple, true - a daughter is a miracle. 

Anyhow, this was a lovely thing. Glad to see you back.

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Wow that was super great! I don't usually like stories in the second person for some reason, but this was great. The quiet tone, the longing between them even though they're married. It's really all fabulous.