Date: August 15, 2011 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Toby! Never caught a break! And all these people always complain to Toby although that is his job :)
I'm OK with Gabe, as in neutral not like or dislike. I actually like Andy/Erin but I think the show milked the love triangle too much (and also with Michael/Holly/AJ). Sorry, I am just new to the fandom and that's what I thought, too much emphasis on relationships in the new seasons rather than the office life. But I think most people hate Andy/Erin in this fandom as it seems.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I don't know what it is about Gabe, but he just makes my skin crawl. No I agree with you about all the triangles; I think that since they have Jim and Pam squared away they thought they should make more. And I always liked Andy and Erin, I just wished they hadn't dumbed her down so much.
Date: October 11, 2010 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
"I'll have your stuff on the porch when you get home" made me laugh out loud. :D
I always just feel so bad for Toby.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I always feel so badly for him too.
Date: October 06, 2010 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, Steph, I love your Toby stories. I don't hate Gabe though. You write Gabe quite well, despite your dislike. Fave part: I could just hear this coming out of Andy:
“I don’t care about that now, Toby!” Andy yelled. He took a deep breath, closed his eyes and said, “Gabe is freakishly tall and thin and has a weird shaped head. He’s a stick insect and there is no way that the beautiful fair maiden Hannon would ever date a stick insect.”
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't explain why I hate Gabe so much I Just do. I hate so much about the things he chooses to be, but glad you enjoyed it and I thought I wrote him well.
9 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2010 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome, Steph! I didn't even know there was a Hello Kitty perfume. :D Poor Toby (as always). The conference room scene was priceless as is Toby's inner monologue while he's talking to Kelly, and his 'you dress smarter.' Ha! Loved it, as all your stuff. Good to see you here again!
Author's Response: Thank you. And oh yeah, there's Hello Kitty everything. And to me it seems like something Erin might wear (and that might, in reality, smell awful). Glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2010 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Another Steph masterpiece :) This was fantastic, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It reads just like an episode. I could envision this playing out from the start. You even managed to perfectly capture Gabe--and you don't like him! :D Thanks for sharing, Steph.
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it. It was fun writing Gabe, even though I hate him :).