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Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2011 12:37 pm Title: Why are you so perfect?

Please update soon!

Reviewer: tizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2011 08:26 am Title: Forget about the office

oooo I miss this story! I hope the RL and less writers block let you update soon :-)

Reviewer: Bayjb Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2011 08:37 pm Title: Why are you so perfect?

Huge fan of your fics and I'm late in reviewing this one! I really love this fic and the spin on Jim being the producer in a relationship with Pam. Anxious to see what messy stuff is coming up!

Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2011 11:10 am Title: Forget about the office

Hey where are you? I'm SERIOUSLY craving more of this fantastic story, MUCH more and hopefully very VERY soon! I miss you... I miss the story updates even if I've had a tough time lately with reviews! Still love and miss it! COME BACK!!!!

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2011 08:24 pm Title: Why are you so perfect?

oh nooo! No messy stuff! And I don't trust Daniels. Please don't ever have Pam worried that jim slept with her.

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2011 03:22 pm Title: Brave New Girl

Loved the phone sex. They hardly said anything, just knew the other person was on the other end of the line doing the same thing, and that was enough for them. Strangely it was very hot! :)

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2011 04:01 pm Title: Why are you so perfect?

I just wanted you to know that I miss your story. And I know that is has been over two weeks since you last gave us a new chapter... Please?

Reviewer: jandjsalmon Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 02:32 am Title: Why are you so perfect?

It is now 3:30am and I just marathoned this story. It's been epic and awesome and I can't wait for more. You think reading exceptional fanfic will be a good enough excuse for my boss when I fall asleep on my desk tomorrow? *g*

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2011 05:41 am Title: Why are you so perfect?

You are perfect ItalianFood! I've got myself a very nervous but excited feeling about what you've got coming up...

I loved so much about this chapter. Jim meeting Pam's parents, and once he realized what was bothering her dad, going outside to reassure him and have that talk was absolutely wonderful! And the thought that he had to do that because they would be his family soon! Swoon-city!

The perfect way they are so proud of each other and the way they share those feelings and that pride with each other when they feel the other needs that boost is just lovely.

I am really hoping that the messy happens around them and they stay that solid in the upcoming chapters... please...

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2011 07:15 pm Title: Why are you so perfect?

Noooo, Sally doesn't like messy, don't make it messy. This was so sweet and perfect and... don't make that all go away LOL. Jim's shirt being inside out was so freaking cute, I could imagine Pam just sitting there laughing at him as he freaked out. youdid a great job with Pam's parents. I loved where they were listening outside and they thought they were talking about Jim, but it was in fact about the food. God, os many things I could say I loved about this chapter, but I'll be here forever. Just, promise me it will end well, no tears, k?

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2011 06:05 pm Title: Why are you so perfect?

You know this story is perfect, right? I love it! Keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: TunaEveryNight Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2011 01:10 pm Title: Why are you so perfect?

I'm really enjoying this story and this chapter was so sweet. The steam at the beginning was perfect. Very loving but still spicy. I love that Jim is so nervous to meet Pam's parents. Of course he wants to make a good impression...and I thought he handled the situation perfectly. This passage...“Check your clothes,” he said. “Everything on correctly? Shoes, underwear? Shit, your dad is going to hate me.” “Because your shirt is on inside out?” She asked with disbelief. “Because I just finished schtupping his little girl. Twice.”...made me laugh out loud. Can't wait to read what happens next. Even if it is messy.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2011 09:04 am Title: Why are you so perfect?

Sexy and sweet. Of course it couldn't be smooth sailing. *sigh* Despite the warning of messy stuff, I'm trusting you, just like Pam's dad is trusting Jim ;)

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2011 08:55 am Title: Deserving of something...

I'm so glad you weren't gone forever! I was starting to get nervous...

But no worries because, as always, worth the wait. I felt so badly for them in the beginning! This secret relationship has got to be so super tough to keep up. Makes being there for each other kinda tricky, huh?

I'm glad that the mystery crew member who knows is keeping a secret. I am anxious to know who it is though... And is this person the only one who knows that the crush they all knew about has grown into more?

And Jill Daniels, when do you head back to sunny California? I don't trust that woman at all! The close talking, late night hotel room visiting, and touching of Jim, I don't like it at all. And since Pam is his secret girlfriend, she can't even cut her for being so out of line!

I hope the blocks stay away from you and you aren't gone so long ever again! Missed you lots!

Author's Response: Oh Aivilo, I missed all of you guys! Good question, we'll get to who else may or may not know very soon. I would love to see Pam cut someone! LOL

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2011 12:04 am Title: Deserving of something...

This was fantastico. I'm half asleep, so I'll have to read it again (what a shame ;)) to review properly, but the way Pam's face changed when she saw Jim was freaking adorable.I could imagine her relief at seeing him, knowing someone was there for her.I do not like Daniels. She needs to get the hell outta town, just sayin' ;)

Author's Response: You're half asleep review was still nice. And Daniels does need to get out of town. Who does she think she is?

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2011 08:20 pm Title: Deserving of something...

Still loving it! When do we find out who knows??

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! We find out soon. Very very soon. Not next chapter though.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2011 05:52 pm Title: Deserving of something...

Yes! An update! ::jumps for joy:: As deliciously tense as ever. So happy you broke through your block. Just as with the show, you manage to portray Jim and Pam as a team amidst the uncertainty and chaos. I think that's pretty great :)

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it. I've always loved how strong of a couple Pam and Jim are when they're together.

Reviewer: BluetimesTwo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2011 07:14 am Title: The best worst week

I'm going crazy waiting for an update! :)

Author's Response: Aww, so sorry! Posting today.

Reviewer: tizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2011 06:35 pm Title: Forget about the office

Okay? I have been refreshing mtt constantly since the 11th and I so need an update!!!! :-) I love this story! Please tell me there's hope for more!!!! :-)

Author's Response: Hey, tizzy, I am so sorry. Update today. Definitely more, lots more.

Reviewer: Dedeen Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2011 06:45 am Title: The best worst week

Stopping by to let you know that I'm with you and eagerly waiting for your updates!

Author's Response: Thanks, Dedeen! Update today. So sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: TunaEveryNight Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2011 01:46 pm Title: The best worst week

Very interesting chapter! And not too long at all. There were so many twists and turns. I'm really interested to see what happens to Jim and Pam's relationship as it seems that more and more people are starting to wonder/find out about them. This is such a interesting premise that you have going on because in most situations (AU or otherwise) Pam and Jim are always struggling to overcome outside forces and get together. But in this story, they ARE together and are struggling against outside forces from the inside of their relationship. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you, TunaEveryNight! When I was first throwing around ideas I knew I wanted to do a story where they would be together from close to the start and very little relationship angst. Just seemed like it would be less stress for me to write. Haha.

Reviewer: Aivilo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2011 10:41 am Title: The best worst week

My guess.... Maybe Ken, since it seemed like Jim referred to him as the sound guy?

Wow! Awesome chapter! The twists and turns had me holding on for whatever would come next. I also was wondering when Jill came to see Jim at his room, was she trying to flirt with him? At times it seemed like she was going for some sort of weird flirty, chummy thing, but maybe that was just me, I know at almost 2am, visitors to hotel rooms usually don't just want to play cards or watch tv. Especially after some heavy drinking..

And I am so excited that Jim gets to stay! That is awesome. But when Jill was getting ruthless at the end, I found my self nervous. If she continues working on the show as line producer, will she eventually see what our mystery crew member saw and cause trouble?

I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks, Aivilo! Totally wasn't just you with the weird flirty thing. We'll get to more on that later. ;)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2011 10:34 am Title: The best worst week

Squeeeeee!  This may be long, but it's not offensive (TWSS)  ;)  Loved all the twists and turns and tension.  The ending took me by surprise! 

Author's Response: Thanks, NanReg! I had been not so patiently waiting to throw the ending into this chapter.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2011 10:33 am Title: The best worst week

I love lon chapters :) This was brilliant. I love how Jim is now staying, and how cute he was when drunk. Also, Jill is a beyotccccccch :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Hannah. I love Drunk Jim!

Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2011 09:56 am Title: Running out of air

Wow! This story is so awesome and continues to get better with every new chapter. I can't really do a proper review right now, or at least MY kind of review. My health is really, really bad... ANYHOW, just wanted you to know that I am out here still, reading and enjoying your story an I promise I will get back on the reviews as soon as I possibly can. In the meantime, thanks for keeping me entertaine. THAT is no easy job thesebdats. Also thak you for continuing to write rivetin, awesome stories that we can get invested in and that raise the bar for other writers. I'm sad with what is going on right now but I know your writin and you always work out the obstacles in our duo'w way in the most amazing ways. I'm personally rooting for Jim to remain in Scranton with Pam, hey, maybe she'll find out she's pregnant and they'll know they must remain together NOW, can't put it off. I confrss, I love little tiny Jam babies!!! :o) Either way, I hope they look at this as an oportunity for Pam to fly to the west coast and meet Jim's parent's much sooner than planned. Just so awesome, but then I expected no less from you! Okay, longer than I planned but I am so pathetic these days, just typing it has seriouslt exhausted me! Can't wait for the next chapter(s)

Author's Response: I'm so sorry to hear that you aren't doing well, but really happy to know that you're finding time to read. I will keep the chapters coming! I too like tiny Jam babies, and Jim and Pam in Scranton... ;)

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