Date: May 11, 2011 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! You really pulled a sneak attack with this one.
To quote Jim quoting you " You amaze me every day"
It would not be bad form if you posted another chapter tomorrow either...just sayin' :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so so much! I liked the idea of keeping the wammy at the end, like there was no way of knowing what was going to happen. It came to me quickly and I had to run with the idea. I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Next chapter is up, hope you'll let me know what you think of it. :) Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh! And I just favorite'd this story....
Cuz it is awesome.
Author's Response: THAT IS AWESOME! Thank you so so much! Sending a giant hug your way :)
Date: May 11, 2011 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, just woah, wow, woah, wow...
What exactly are you tryna do to me? That amazing family morning, followed by that grenade tossed in their little family bubble!
I am thrilled that you already told us that this story mapped out. That saves my life because now I have to hold my breath waiting for chapter two.... Don't let me run out of air!
Author's Response: BREATHE!!! LOL I just posted the second chapter! I would have done it sooner but my coworker kept interrupting me all day long. I do have a very real end point for this, and hopefully it's not terribly predictable. Glad you're enjoying it and I really appreciate the kind review. Hope to hear from you again! :)
Date: May 11, 2011 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I feel blessed having a new story so soon. If this first chpater is any indication of things to come we are in for quite a treat. Smut, Adorable and Angst. We have a winner!
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I'm really happy you liked the first chapter of this story. It's great to hear that you liked this, especially since it's kind of difficult and also embarrassing to write the smut parts. Hope you enjoy the update, and hope you'll share your thoughts again! Thanks so much :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I always enjoy your writing and this is no exception. Fantastic start! I thought for sure that Pam was getting the axe because Jo found out her office administrator job was made up.
Really well done, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely compliment! I tried to keep an element of surprise to the first chapter. I appreciate your encouraging review so much! Thank you! :-)
Date: May 11, 2011 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I'm actually... wow.... okay, let me start from the top. First, the smut was HOT. How evertything for Jim is just perfect. How in tune he and Pam are. And I seriously laughed out loud at Jim gving Cece a lemon, just because he liked the way it made her lips pucker, that is SO Jim. I also really enjoy your Daddy Jim, and Cece, the way she asked if it was their home days was just so adorable...
THEN, you go and hit us with this, with them letting him go. jesus, how are they going to cope? What's he going to tell Pam. I'm seriously loving this... I need an update asap lol
Author's Response: You have your update lol Thanks so much Sally! It's not easy trying to write like a two year old would talk but I'm glad it didn't throw you off. I hope you like the update, and thanks again for all of the support and encouragement!
10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start for a new story. I really enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you'll like the update and hope to hear from you again! :)